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by Rian

person Selow
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh sasuke, you are the saddest asshole in the whole world. seriously. now i'm uber-interested in what's gonna happen next.
person blazer6
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think you should put a small fling with naruto and tenten that suggestion i made would be doable. Keep up the good work.
person Kokiri
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, in my opinion, this is the cuttesstt anyone has ever written sasuke. ever.
person silverflame
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another good chapter! ^_^ I don't think you need to apologize for the yaoi at all, if people still whine about it they shouldn't have read past the first chapter! I actually love the combination between yaoi and het, but not many authors write those stories as fairly as you do. In fact, you're probably the only threesome author I've come across that doesn't emphasize one pairing over the other. And everyone's still in character! (Very much appreciated.)

You're the only author I check in this section, by the way. Because you are just that awesome!

Keep up the good work!
person unicorn
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the chapter was amazing!!!!
the way naruto reacted when he realized that the girl he was going to sleep with wasn't sakura but ino was great written! (poor ino - she doesn't know, that his reaction wasn't because of her, but because he felt "disgusted" by himself...)

the way sasuke provoked naruto was really mean! he tries to hurt those people who mean a lot to naruto to get through to him...
i LOVED the ending of this chapter!!!!! it was great that naruto walked away after they had sex! - sasuke deserved no better!
i wonder if naruto knows why sasuke did this whole thing?!
person Geddian
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit, you just keep raising the bar for Sasuke's assholeism >.< this story is so angsty it hurts me, but I just can't stop re-reading it every couple of weeks, it just rocks so much. Update soon!
person SailorSun1
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is as great as ever! Please hurry and write the next chapter I can't wait to read it!
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad...Sasuke is such a bastard, but...well...*sniffle*

I just want to say that you have a way of writing lemons that most authors would kill for...descriptions that I would have never thought are abundant in your fic, making it very good. I love this story and hooray for updates.
person me
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Alot...but im a bit confuzzled. Is Sasuke afraid of losing Naruto to Sakura? Or does he just want to strengthen that bond he has with naruto? Or is it that he just gets off on Naruto's angry look? Whatever it is, im sure itll clear up soon. Sasuke kinda scares me, is there some hidden motive behind everything hes been doing? Well..get smut all and all..update soon!
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It'll be interesting seeing how Sasuke handles being snubbed. Looking forward to Sakura and Naruto's next encounter.