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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! Wow..I can't believe that happened, although it was expected and in character and everything. Why do Naruto and Sasuke keep hurting each other? Well..more of Sasuke..bastard..I love it ^_^ Please update soon!!! I like how Sakura isn't completely ignoring Naruto! She cares about him too! Awww ^_^ Can't wait for the next update!
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October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for the update! I love this fic and check back almost religiously. The smut is good and the storyline keeps me wanting more! Good job, and I hope to see another update soon!
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.......must..... update.....
Gah! Im loving this story! I do hope you update!
Gah! Im loving this story! I do hope you update!
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
On principle I avoid true AU fics like the plague, but this was a complete shock. It's a great fic, and I hope you update it soon ^^
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story! You have them perfectly in character, well, except for maybe Neji, but you made him SO HOT! The interactions between my fav team 7 are right on, which is uncommon in an AU. I like how the plot's sexy, but not rushed. Keep up the great work!
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Highly entertaining and smutty! I hope to see this updated soon!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I'm not usually into Sas/Nar but this was pretty hot. Throw Sakura in the mix and you've got me hooked! I love the set up and your charcter development. So far your portrayal of Sasuke makes me want to punch him in the face but good for you for making the reader feel powerful emotions, whether good or bad. I'm totally rooting for the underdog here and hope that Naruto gets the girl in the end. I also hope Sasuke gets a lesson in humility and maybe stops being such a big jerk face. It was an enjoyable read (even at 1 in the morning!) Update soon!
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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was the one that suggested naruten. i think it's doable. If naruto is star of the men's basketball team tenten could be the star of the girls basketball team with that peerless accuracy and all. It could be like she's getting frustrated with her lot in life with parents after her to always do well at sports. she could break up with a guy who only saw her as a trophy girlfriend. It might be that when she goes watch a boy's game she notices naruto's genuine affection with sakura and gets intrigued by it. She challenges him to a little one on one and they see similarities in each other that eventually evolves into a friends with benefits situation. Oh my god I wrote alot i am so starved for some good naruten. I am seriously hoping you go through with some naruten. Regardless keep up the good work. I hate sasuke he's an ass in any universe. update soon.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*big gasp* Hey! I love your story! Its totally awesome! And I agree with you too. No Nar/Ino. Ewwwwwwwww!!!!! That's disgusting!!!!!!! And with Tenten too?! Excuse me while I go vomit... *walks off* Just kidding! But seriously, don't do that. Oh! Also, will Sakura start to like Naruto more than Sasuke, 'cause it seems to be going to way. Which is good. I LOVE the pairing Nar/Sak. *ahem* Anyway, please update soon! Thanxs! :) :p ;)
P.S. Hey, do you mind e-mailing me telling me whenever you update? I would really appreciated it & I will be your best friend forever, 'cause I can't afford to miss any of this story! Thanxs! hehe!
P.S. Hey, do you mind e-mailing me telling me whenever you update? I would really appreciated it & I will be your best friend forever, 'cause I can't afford to miss any of this story! Thanxs! hehe!
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ah... sasuke is such an... oh i can't find words to describe him!!!! - how could he hurt naruto like this?! - on purpose!!!!
and why did he do it?
poor sakura - she doesn't know what she has done (it wasn't really her fault! - sasuke is just a sneaky bastard!!!!) - she should have hit him! (hard)
hopefully naruto would kick his ass!!!! (i think everyone is on narutos side *grin*)
and for ino... she's frustrated and hurt... but it's not right to use naruto to feel better! (she's a good girl ^^)
and why did he do it?
poor sakura - she doesn't know what she has done (it wasn't really her fault! - sasuke is just a sneaky bastard!!!!) - she should have hit him! (hard)
hopefully naruto would kick his ass!!!! (i think everyone is on narutos side *grin*)
and for ino... she's frustrated and hurt... but it's not right to use naruto to feel better! (she's a good girl ^^)