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February 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was really adorable. Truly. And it wasn't boring (like fanfics can sometimes get when the main characters get together quite a few chapters before the end). I definitely really liked it! Absolutely wonderful. And I liked the different complexities of their personalities and their confusion and whatnot. It was very... new. Yes, New. Anyways, really great job!
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You caught me already in the first chapter. I mean; Sasuke made a joke! Hehe. This story was really great, I like your language and Sasuke is so... I don't know but I liked the way he was searching for who he was. (I finds it kind of weird that he was the one that liked gardening when that's actually Naruto's thing in canon *smiles*).
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading it and I sure will do it again someday. Good luck with future writing, you're a great author so far.
Anyways, I really enjoyed reading it and I sure will do it again someday. Good luck with future writing, you're a great author so far.
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February 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.
Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.
All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.
Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
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January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this fic. I especially liked how you dealt with Sasuke's return and his friends' reactions. Your portrayal of Naruto and Sasuke's emotional issues with respect to romantic love was very realistic. Given that for most of their lives one has focused on gaining recognition and the other on revenge, it's only natural that they'd have some difficulty. Thank you for sharing. :)
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May 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=36. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=36. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gosh, I was just going over this a little bit, and it really reminds me of starting out here. I still love Sasuke in this. I can't figure out why he's so different from other author's Sasuke's. Weird. I heart this story so much.
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That story was just 'wow'. very moving, very well written, and very entertaining. Awesome job keeping them in character! Thanks so much for sharing your literary talents. I very much enjoyed reading!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awwwwww, kawaii!!! Cute ending!! ^^ You did an amazing job with this fic! Cant wait to see more of your work!
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October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEE!
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October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh yay! happy ending! ^.^
That was a very sweet "I love you" scene; one of the best I've ever read. :D
I thought Sakura would wind up being their surogate. I can't really imagine anyone else doing it.
And I like how the title words are also the last words in the story. (come home with me) I think stuff like that is spiffy. ^^ tee, hee.
I would love to be e-mailed when you post the sequel:
yuri--chan@hotmail.com
p.s. I was practically giddy when I saw my (two) sceen name(s) at the end of the chapter ^^ *feels silly* =P thank you! XD
That was a very sweet "I love you" scene; one of the best I've ever read. :D
I thought Sakura would wind up being their surogate. I can't really imagine anyone else doing it.
And I like how the title words are also the last words in the story. (come home with me) I think stuff like that is spiffy. ^^ tee, hee.
I would love to be e-mailed when you post the sequel:
yuri--chan@hotmail.com
p.s. I was practically giddy when I saw my (two) sceen name(s) at the end of the chapter ^^ *feels silly* =P thank you! XD