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Lol. Your A/N is true. where i live, people beat you for your birthday too. But unlike some countries that share the tradition, i still receive presents too. I remember on one of my b'days my mom woke up at the stroke of midnight to give me my birthday licks. lol. it was maddening. nice chap tooo

That was a very beautiful story although I am surprised that they would need Sakura for having children as I would expect Naruto to transform with the sexy jutsu. After all, Sasuke seemed to be attracted to the girl(Mariko??) because she could almost be Naruto's female form, well, that is what I thought. Anyway, I think Sasuke would love to jump the female Naruto then having babies by AI. Has he ever actually seen Naruto doing his sexy jutsu in the anime? I dont recall.
Oh well, I do want to be notified when you finally post a sequel to this story. Her is my email: carl_zoo@yahoo.com, please let me know as soon as possible. Thanks for the great fic!

Sincerely

Carla

Oh you must email me when you get the sequel all ready!

Email: starry_eyedstar@hotmail.com

I loved this story! It was so well written! I can't wait for the next.

Memoriees... gosh, I can't believe this story is over. It's probably one of the first ones I ever read, did you know that? Not first first, but first sort of long-term, multi chapter story. But I am very pleased with the way it ended, I don't know how you managed to wrap up everything so well and not make it feel rushed. Ugh though, I bet the sequel's gonna kill me. But I can't wait to read about their bebes!!!

Ohhhh sweat! As much as a mpreg fan I'm and as much as I dispise Sakura, I thik it was sweet of her offer to be a surrogate mother. I'll love to read the sequel, please do e-mail me when you post it at sango.yura@gmail.com.
Hope to hear more from you soon!

That was a wonderful way to end an awesome story. Great job! I loved the scene between Sasuke and Itachi- you didn't make Sasuke lose terribly against his brother, but Itachi was still a bit superior to him.

As I said, loved the ending and I can't wait unil the sequel. Can I get a notice when it's up? My e-mail is kiro_jaba200@hotmail.com

Keep it up!

Sorry, it's kirojaba_200@hotmail.com

Lol, anyways, great job!

Loved the ending!! Very nice, and i'm so glad you've decided to write a sequel. Thanks for the acknowledgment on having reviewed this fic along with the others. Anyway, i'd love to know when you post the first chapter of the sequel: analapana83@aol.com. Good luck!

OMGAWD! ITACHI??!!!
*squees in delight* You're freakin' awsome!!!XXDDDD And EVIL! How can you post such a cliffhanger!? *cries histerically*
My face looks like this: *0* "omg, wtf, I need to read the next chapter, LYKE RIGHT NOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!"

(sorry for the crack review, but I love this story XD *drools* that was a good smut scene XXDDD;;;)

Whoa, truly awesome fic! The guys are very much in character. I like the best the way you characterise Naruto: "It wasn't that he put others before himself, it was that he didn't _know_ how to put himself before others". And what a great cliffhanger you left us with (yes, I can appreciate the delicate art of a well-crafted cliffhanger) Sasuke, sick and drugged, overall vulnerable, and Itachi in the room?
Hey, would it be too much to ask that you email me when you post chapter 8 of this wonderful fic? (At aureus.yarara@gmail.com)
Looking forward to chapter 8,
~Calamus