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for Come Home With Me

by MsKeller

person DevilLived
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh you little... How could you leave us hanging there? Damn, now we have to wait until you update to find out what happens.

Loved this chapter, I liked the scene between Sakura and Sasuke. It really displayed how much they both had changed from when they were kids.

Great job! Update soon!
person jazz
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ilove the story, it is so sad, yet so happy, i wonder will there be a mpreg in this story or not, how did saskue find out about kakasi's pet project involve naruto?
person Anna
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait WHAT!! Ohhh come on!!! You can't leave us like that, ending it like that... leaving us wanting more, you have to update soon! I loved the chapter by the way!

person Kagami no Namida
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good! Update! I want to read more! And Sasuke isnt aloud to leave Naruto for some chick!! Doesnt work that way!!! ^_^ Update
person Stacy
schedule October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man was that a cliff hanger!! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!
person DevilLived
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wah! I loved it! That was a really cool way to have Sasuke realize that he wants kids, and an even better way to end a chapter. But the whole thing was awesome. Lol, only Shikamaru could walk in on two sexy men going at it and only say: Troublesome.

Anyways, update soon!
person ukestalker
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi i loVe your fic!!! ^-^ it's so good!!
my name is Serah, yeah the spelling is weard but hay i love it.

keep on writing and i'll keep reading :P
person Nomme de Plume
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is a wonderful story! i hope you continue it soon.
person mel-chan
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey, so far i really like this. please continue.

unless its done . . . im not too sure.
person DevilLived
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far and I love how you make Sasuke so down to earth. Some stories have him all: I'm a bastard! I wanna kill Itachi! You guys can all die for all I care!

So I like your take on him, which is very good and I think it's realistic.

Awesome writing, you're chapters are always so long and they look lik they're well thought out too!

Update soon, alright?