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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww man, this story is sick. So twisted and perverted. Emaciated!Itachi is so NOT a turn on. And neither is Raped!Itachi. Well... maybe a little... I crave to read more. I think if you had just left the story as a oneshot it would warrant a severe fine from Itachi/Sakura fans everywhere. But since you are turning this into something with a bit more sustenance, we will let you off with a slap on the wrist: Quit hurting Itachi! Hasn't he suffered enough? You know you shouldn't speak ill of the dead.

Who is going to take care of all these bastard Uchiha's? They're gonna need a daddy. I think Sakura should convince Sasuke to let Itachi live to be tortured with the "joys" of parenthood. That would be a suitable punishment, don't you think? Jk, that's a horrible idea

I'll keep the reviews coming to encourage your motivation, since you have a wonderful way of writing. Have you thought about a career in novel writing? Your style is not too flowery or poetic, in the way many aspiring writers tend to lean towards. I think the best word to describe your writing is "descriptive".

Hope to hear more from you soon!
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! You left me speachless with your writing! Is magnificent creative and perfectly detailed. The plot and everything, is one of those stories you remember, that's how good it is. I had so much fun reading it, because is very entertaining and it just drags you in. Lovely! Please, I encourege you to keep writing. Don't stop. Is a precious piece of fan work and so far from me it deserves 5 outta 5 stars.
^^
Thank you so much for posting this!
person roxnroll
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think I read this a long time ago on mediaminer. I think it only went to chapter 4. I'm looking forward to getting to chapter 5.
rox
person roxnroll
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great job. I'm so glad that you updated. Can't wait to read more.
Rox
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I read this story a long time ago but had forgotten its name. I'm so glad you are continuing with it because I really like it. It doesn't follow the cliche Saku/Ita plots that have already been beaten into the ground.
person moodymel
schedule June 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am really excited to see another chapter added to this story. It looks like Sakura and Itachi are getting closer. Things are definately starting to get interesting.
P.S. my new email address is moddymel2@yahoo.com
I haven't been able to change it yet.
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm so very, very glad that you decided to continue this story!! I can't wait to see how all this tension between Itachi & Sakura is going to play out. I also like the fact that your storyline is unique; sakura helping rebuild the uchiha clan... by alternative means. Haven't read anything like it yet. I hope that you continue to update, as there are a shortage of good ItaXSaku stories out there. Rather, all the ones that are good I have already read. Looking forward to more!!
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. This story is so well-written and almost ingenious! I've read A LOT of fanfiction (makes me seem like I don't have much of a life...sigh) but I've never come across a plot quite like this one. Keep up the awesome work! Ja ne!
person Zelha
schedule May 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! I was wondering if you remember this little baby and if you're going to continue...

Greetings! ;D
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great chapter ^ ^

please update soon