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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

person animecatgrl
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay! *jumps up and down waving a flag* Write write write! I just finished reading all four chapters! :P Such an interesting plot! ^_^ Why can't Itachi use his Mangekyo Sharingan on her though? He could use it to show her what he really desires >.> hehe
person NeeN
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LLOOOVVVVEE ITTTT!!!!
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! You really REALLY need to update!
person Anon
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh! You really REALLY need to update!
person dream
schedule December 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot daaaaaaaaaamn! This is the hottest story with a ItaSaku pairing and it is far from smut. And onlt FOUR chapters? You tease me every chapter seems looks like a cliffhanger. T_T I think you take sadistic pleasure in making your fans wait. I will try to review every chapter if it keeps you going!!!!
person WingedMoogle
schedule December 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really interesting and original to boot. Overall, a great fic which I hope you'll continue. ;)
person Yuffie
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygosh. This is probably my absolute favorite fiction. I would reaaaaaaaally appreciate it if you continued it and kept it up. <3 Hee, see the heart? I'd luff you forever!

Especially since I want to see what happens next. Like, really really bad. xD

Anyways-excellent work!
person Valkyrie
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the title! Laby fan, are we? I'm a diehard myself. Now I have the song in my head! Anyway, GREAT story! Very original and I absolutely love the storyline. The song fits too. Well, it would if Itachi was as giving as Jareth is. Oh well. I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon if you can! I really want to see what else develops between Sakura and Itachi. It's obvious that they both want each other, but will something more develop? And we all know that Kisame's bound to come to Itachi's rescue. Eeeeee! I can't wait! I'll say it again! Please update soon!
person mel
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. I think that you're doing a great job, both with the plot and the dialogue. Please update again soon.
person kara-chan.a
schedule December 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You've outdone yourself. It's awesome. But...now I just want another update, -_-'