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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

person LadyApollonia
schedule December 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I love this fic! It is so awesome! Woot! Sakura should have shoved that bastard through the wall! That piece of shit... I really hope you update soon.
person kat
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg this was so good. plz update I luv luv luv the story
person akasha
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm so glad that you updated! please update again soon... don't make me wait(or beg)!! awesome job so far.
person lupi
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! its so ripe with sexual tension you just want them to attack each other lol
person jennjennr
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, so good, I had wondered when this was going to happen, Sasuke trying to seduce Sakura, it was only a matter of time before he ran out of women to sleep with but her. I absolutly LOVED her reaction to Sasuke's advance, strong but still slightly love sick wonderful mixing of the two feelings! I also loved the ugh specimen collecting scene, their eyes meeting and the almost zing of desire both felt, great. I cannot wait to see them progressing further in their relationship, ackward though it may be. I also rerally loved the humor, I'm a sucker for humor and I loved the way you added it to this chapter, it really added the little iceing on the cake. Itachi's thoughts were wonderful, the almost normal and human thinking was fun, and very in character how he thought it while Sakura would have said it out loud, kinda like the nial polish question... ok well I'll cut the review off here since I'm shivering with cold making it very hard to type, thank you so much for reviewing, and please do so again as soon as you are able.
person animevivverz
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written and definitely caught my interest. Great job!
person Miharu
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOOH! LOVING IT! But, could you email me or something the nerxt tiem you update? I never do look to see anymore, so many fics just...are pretty crappy lol...so I'd really appreciate it if you email me next time you udoate?? sorry my writing is soo fucked up right now lol!!

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person broken dollz
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz continue!!!!!!!!!!! i love this!! please continue please!!
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Awesome job!
I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
person J-Pop Princess
schedule December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have just now stumbled onto this story and so far I am loving it! I think this is the first story I've ever read where I actually WANT Sakura to end up with Itachi. Weird huh? But good for you for being able to make the reader feel that way. The situation you've put the characters in is very unique and I like the descriptive style of your writing. I'll be waiting anxiously for updates!