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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

person Kara-chan.a
schedule November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo! I love this story, actually I love all your stories and I just want to know when I can hope to see an update? I've been sitting on the edge of my seat unsatisfied for far to long now. PLEASE! Your killing me, I need an update. Your the goddess of lemon I swear it!
-Kara-chan.a
person kataimiko
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEAAASSSSEEEEEEE update this fic! Seriously, it is damn near impossible to find decent ItaSaku lemon fics, and yours is one of the best! Hopefully you have not given up on this fic...or completely forgotten about it. ;___;
person harlita
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay!!
Yes.
More. you must update more. and then some more.

Excellent writing. Excellent plot. Excellent character reactions. You have been bookmarked!!! *dances*
person ree
schedule November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story! i can totally see this happening in "naruto", but anyways, i hope you update soon!
person bac
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is really a very interesting plot; I can't wait to see where you go with it... Hmmm... what is up with Sasuke, does he just have no interest in Sakura or is he just an ass and figures if he gets involved with her she won't "work" for him??? UGH, WHAT IS HE THINKING!?
person AMMY
schedule August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my first review on aff.net and i must say, i'm usually one of those people, who don't bother to review, regardless of whether i liked the story or not. I'm just plain lazy. However, this time i really have to thank you for this wonderful fanfic. How you described Sakura's feelings in this third chapter was absolutely great. I hope that you'll update soon ;D
person Sanguine
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's not b/c you're not good enough, Sakura-chan. Sasuke-baka just doesn't deserve you. GODDAMNIT!!! Going out with Itahci would show Sasuke, plus he's also much cooler and he actually feels something for you! XD

Update soon!
person Ox King
schedule July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Umm...wow, this is kind of twisted. A new chapter soon please, thanks.
person Silence
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The plot premise was so interesting/amusing that I was checking on this fic for weeks. The story isn't moving forward as fast as I'd like, and Sakura ought to be a little angrier at Sasuke and asserting herself, but the plot keeps me on my toes. It drives me insane waiting to find out what happens next.

Looking forward to the next segment. =)
person krickitat
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahh finally!
i have missed this and i cant wait for the rest

i think this is as far as we have gone with the brainstorming so just let me know if you wanna go over stuff again. where are you taking it from here? is sakura gunna get preggers?


cant wait!