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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

person Belle
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I can't wait for the next one, please update soon!
person Kym
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. o.o That's some really good writing there. =3 And the plotline is... Well, creepy. I feel angry for Sakura -- Inner!Me is going, "Break Itachi free and kick Sasuke's ass!" XDDDDD Nicely done. This has gone into my favorites, and I can't wait for the rest. ^_^
person Arryelle
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awsome I love how you do their thoughts so perfectly I hope you can update soon I love this story alot.

Arry
person Sanguine
schedule July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
SCREW YOU SASUKE!!! You're so mean to Itachi-chan. >_<

Hope Itachi finds a way to break out of that hell.

Update soon!
person =)
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it.
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great plot, original idea and beautifully written is a total bonus! Awesome! Can't wait for more.
person pink_Scaboo
schedule July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, oh my, *readjust glasses*
Oh my, this is too good to bear.
person kandymankan
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh my, oh my, a very nice story, surely, b ut I can't help but pity sasuke, oh my
person Dominic Shade
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I already like this fict. a lot hon. Please update quickly?
person Nasis
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it! Can't wait for more!