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for As the World Falls Down

by dragonflyelj

schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWESOMNESSS!!!!

yo havnt heard much from you now have i??

did you read the last of genshin??? it was awesome and i totally approve


ok so yea you dont update this nearly fast enough but oh well i guess i'll live. did you notice that i updated my stories?

oh uh...i cant remember but nothing is falling out off or on so it cant be that bad

GREAT JOB!!
krickitat
person Chiza
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I am liking this story so far! Can't wait to see how you flesh this story out!!!!!
person jennjennr
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thank you for the heads up about the update, I really appreciate it. Awsome chapter by the way, I loved the professionalism you gave Sakura, and the growing sense of desperation you are having Itachi feel. Hmm Saskura standing up to Sasuke...Loved that, finally she tells him off. I don't know why but I really did like the clinical feeling of this chapter, it made all of the actions seem to stand out so much more. Thank you for updating and writing such a wonderful, interesting story, I really look forward to your next update.
person Nasis
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very disturbing. More? :D
person jennjennr
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huh wow...original...and very pervy...me likes. Wow hmm I really like this, and its very weird, I mean does Sasuke know Sakura has to wack Itachi off? man what a weird thought. I really can't wait to see where this goes....ha love the idea. Thanks for writing this.
person XUChihaSakuraX
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great Story update soon! Well, IDK how to use AFF yet so I cant put u on the favorites and other things they have -.-; but ............................I'll check back every now and again for the next chapter. LoL
person krickitat
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interims are REAAAAAAAAAAALLLLY long for you now arnt they?

i remember reading this MONTHS back....your pony dont run very fast now does it?
LOL ha ha but i LOVE this story...if only i had your patience to sit and wait on a story until i felt it was at its best. I dont have that kinda patience we all know this lets not point fingers please


anywho ill talk to you later
~kri-chan
person Siiy
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm o.o Love it! >.> I hope you update soon o.o though it takes a long time till you update T_T Pity. Your fics are great.
person animechick262003
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
‘Hey, Itachi. I know you and your brother hate each other, but he is trying to revive the clan. You know, the one you slaughtered. So could you whack yourself off into this little cup so we can populate half the women of Konoha with your bastard children?’ Yeah, like a ton of bricks.

BWAHAHAHAHAHA!! OMG!! This was too dayum funeh! Girlfriend this is off the chain. You know how much I love your writing style, and this is just one more testament to the talent you possess. Now when are we going to work on some original stuff?? *WINK* Anyways, you had better email when this is updated. This fic is soooo hot, and I can't wait to see what happens next



LOVE YA GIRL