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for Cock Fight

by Trollmia

person Tsukiyomi
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Haaa! I love the last thing Naruto said! I feel you portrayed Sasuke and Naruto perfectly in this. Just like their on screen rivalry!
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woo. *fans self* very nice.
person Moon_Shadow
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I love the story! One word for it "Hot" ^^ lol I love the smex part! Totally hot!
person Fan
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That is really incredible. It blended humor and seriousness. Dead on about the characters I could so see this happening.
person Ly
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“Well, just remember – drop your soap and I’ll be there…”
BEST.LINE.EVER!!!!!
XDD
person lo
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fun. And I am glad that you tried to stay away from cliches. nice job, that was hot.
person Inuyasha_is_mine
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
rofl those two are soo stubborn!! haha id soo see them be like this in an actual relationship..especially naruto whos way too stubborn for his own good and sasuke just too damn proud to admit it ^^ awesome job i loved it!.
--ruby
person ann dragera
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
honestly loved it! love the characterization. the two are so stubborn yet they want the same thing that i could see this happening. plus with sasuke being such a genious - i could just see those little wheels inside his head turning at just how he could get naruto - i love a sasuke who just knows how to push naruto's buttons!

honestly and truly though - i would love for a sequal - with naruto getting revenge!
i love the sasunaru fics - but the narusasu ones are just as good sometimes (if done just right)

honestly sasuke and naruto are much like kaiba and joey from yugioh
either could be seme or uke - though normally it is the smarter and more controlling one who is seme
person bb
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you have to make another chapter. I'm saving this story. It's awesome.
person Kyuubigirl
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow, I so needed that. I was in tears and squealing, I was laughing so hard. Yes, great as one-shot, but I was dying for more at the end. I can't believe how funny that was and yet such a turn on. F'n great.