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for Cock Fight

by Trollmia

person Your Mom\'s Face
schedule June 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (etc.)

That was awesome!!

And hot!

And funny!!

WOO!

Dude, you gotta write a followup chapter called, "Drop Your Soap, and I'll Be There..."!!

I think the basic theme is self-explanitory...

Toodles!!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA (*continues laughing until she passes out*)
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cock fight. lol. too funny. nice one, trollmia. looking foward to your next ficlet.
person Ezj
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Good as ever... I presumed it was somehing like that from the title
and you didn't dissapoint us ^_^ I just love you're stories.
It's realy easy to read and well written.

"Swedish"

"Trevligt trevligt att ha lite andra svenska över fjortisåldern
här, dina Naruto stories är väl artikulerade och man fastnar
direkt för dem, kunde jag skriva Naruto skulle jag göra det
men då har jag i alla fall dig som förebild. Hoppas du inte
drabbas av skrivkramop."
person Pic\'s Pixie
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg that was so great! loved every bit of it. Its great as a one shot but the way you hinted at things could totally make it a multiple piece story, like you could add a chapter when naruto gets to be seme or even elaborate about sasuke's possessive side like in this story when he said something about once having him he wouldn't let anyone else lay a finger on him, it could totally work, but if not its still amazing as a oneshot
person Elric Maxwell
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Once again you've made me one frustrated girl! ^_^ Your fics are hot as always!!! Guess Sasuke better not drop that soap, huh? LOL!!!! EM
person Briryan
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, very interesting. I wonder if Sasuke would drop the bar of soap or not. Cause if he did, one would know the Naruto would go through with his plan.
person Jolene
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great! The ending had me laughing so hard I couldn't breath! I love your fics! I can't wait to read the next! The whole cock fight idea that Naruto had was really funny too!
person ladywolfTerri
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods!!! *fans self*... smexy!!.. really damned smexy!!!... will there be more??.. like possibly a series of one shots??
person Deion
schedule June 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice