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good work, please update

great job man keep up the good work

update please the waiting is driving me insane

I have to say I love the way this story is going and I hope you don't drop it like I've seen people do before. I find this to be one of the best Sakura/Naruto fics I've read. I like the lighter side of Kyuubi because I've haven't seen that done often. In fact I think this is the third time I've seen someone put Kyuubi in this sort of kind gentle way and I applaud you for that because most people see Kyuubi is a mindless monster which nobody can state for sure because Narutos never reall had an in depth conversation with Kyuubi. I like the twist the story is taking and I hope there is more coming because I can see this fic could become rather long maybe even have a couple of sequels but thats up to you I guess. Just wanted to say I thoroughly enjoy this story and would be honored to be a beta for you if you need one. Thanks for the story.

Hey please update and keep going with this story.. I know you might be busy but I beg you to keep with this story it is just getting really good. I wanna know what happens and how did a few of the couples got together like Hinata and Lee. Neji and Tenten and when did they become an item and when did Temari and Shikamaru become husban and wife....JTB8834@aol.com

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I just got done reading" Revelations of the Mind" & loved it. I like how the story is turning out & hope that you continue with it. Please email me when you update it. Thanks

oh my goodness, i love the plot lines to this story its so intricate and has so much depth, and the love you have described for the both of them is very well written. i really enjoyed reading what i have so far, and i really look forward to the next chapters to come, so please update soon i really cant wait!