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for Revelations Of The Mind

by Gavin

person ....
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i really like this fanfic and can't wait for it to be finished
person gryphonsknight
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story so far please continue the tale. If you need some one to attempt to edit for spelling or just another opinion on what you've wrote feel free to to drop a line. I would like to ask thou for you to give a better list of just what powers the blood line limit will include and whether or not it will deal with their eyes or not. On another thing doesnt Naruto basically already have the armor ofthe fox when he goes crazy he has shrugged off incrediably powerful attacks easily just by the presence of the ckra around him.
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Keep it going.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person Josh
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey great update and I like the way the story is finally picking up but I have a few questions if you wouldbe kind inanswering them e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com and I will send them to you...
person logophobia
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i give it 4.5 stars, cuz you have to work on your grammer but i like it alot
person Laini
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow,i love it.You dont see a lot of these fics really. Update soon,cant wait to read more! ^_^
person Wrathchylde
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bugger. Too good. Now I have to wait another....couple months. It's a pain that I have to re-read the story every time to remember what's going on. Moral of the story: update more often so I'm less inconvenienced. Everyone wants my convenience afterall.
person Iyeee
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please please please continue this story!
person Josh
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice story I read every chapter and I like what I have read from you and got to give you props on making a great story for Sakura and Naruto. Keep up the great writing. E-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com
person kyle
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i have read all of the story so far and i can't wait for more to come.