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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great chapter. this story just gets better and better.
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July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I find myself checking the site daily for story updates
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i can't wait to see the next chapter
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update as soon as possible.
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I must say i thoroughly enjoy your fic, not alot of Naru/saku out there and i am happy to say you bring a littlelight to the dark and lonely corner that is narusaku on this site. Keep on writing, hope to see more. Love and Peace.
-ConVoy
Yes i am Optimus Prime
-ConVoy
Yes i am Optimus Prime
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch.6 was very well written and I enjoyed it a whole lot hehe. Awesome job on the story so far. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch.7 is here and what a chapter. Shizne as his mom is fantastic, can't wait to read how their relationship develops. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off, this is one of the best stories I've been reading so far. Well written and everything flows so wonderfully.
Second and most of all, I love how you chose to use Shizune as Naruto's mother (to be honest I almost wish that it was true canon-wise lol). I'm really looking forward to seeing how you develop a mother/son relationship between the two. Because somehow I see Shizune really wanting to tell him and become that motherly figure she didn't have a chance to be, but being painfully unable to because of nervousness/fear of rejection or whatever other reason you may have in store for us.
Second and most of all, I love how you chose to use Shizune as Naruto's mother (to be honest I almost wish that it was true canon-wise lol). I'm really looking forward to seeing how you develop a mother/son relationship between the two. Because somehow I see Shizune really wanting to tell him and become that motherly figure she didn't have a chance to be, but being painfully unable to because of nervousness/fear of rejection or whatever other reason you may have in store for us.
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June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great story. this chapter gos into alot of detail. i like your choice for naruto's mother. this is the best naruto/sakura story i have seen yet so please put the next chapter up soon.
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June 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I wasn't really happy with this chapter.
First of all if, Naruto transferred Kyuubi power to Sakura, shouldn't it be healing her?
And the whole business with Sakura being the kyuubi seal is a little contrived, even for Naruto. I don't get how Tsunade is able to figure all this out. And I would think she should be a little more concerned about the state of her apprentice.
I'm also not cool with Naruto and Sakura being aware of any of this. It sort of deflates a lot of the drama that you don't see Naruto wanting to make this conscious decision himself.
First of all if, Naruto transferred Kyuubi power to Sakura, shouldn't it be healing her?
And the whole business with Sakura being the kyuubi seal is a little contrived, even for Naruto. I don't get how Tsunade is able to figure all this out. And I would think she should be a little more concerned about the state of her apprentice.
I'm also not cool with Naruto and Sakura being aware of any of this. It sort of deflates a lot of the drama that you don't see Naruto wanting to make this conscious decision himself.