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for Ours to protect, Ours to love

by Trollmia

person butabara
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really, really hope to see this updated VERY soon!!!!!!
schedule December 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
toos the blonde at Neji lol i would love to see that set up or add him to the 3 and let things go that way but i like the Neji one better
person Nami
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, umm,... well never actually did a review so sorry if it´s stupid^^

well I loved that story ist wonderfull. And well actually I can´t wait for you to continue. But man that naruto thing is really bothering. But still Kiba is available, and you know they are pretty much alike so that would be nice. And I can´t remember what happened with kin you know the one with the bells on the needles? maybe she could reappear. Or well karin I think without her stupid glasses she would look pretty hot :D

so forgive my english and waiting for you to continue^^
person AngelRavenDove
schedule March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to finish this story cause I love the plot and I really want to see how it all goes. Naruto seems like he needs to be with a guy. someone firm and understanding but masculine enough to deal with his bullshit.
person LadyWolf
schedule March 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic...! I can't stand that Naruto is all alone.... How about Neji?

I think they make a hot pairing XD

Post soon!!
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I SO Loved Your Fic.So Sweet!

However,I'm Not A Yaoi/Yuri Fan But,As This Is Your Story,I Don't Mind...'cuz I Love It! ^^

Please,No Naruto With Iruka-sensei. =P

...Ideas?Hmm...What About...Shizune?Ako?Tsunade? =D
person Anon
schedule May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
How about Shizune. She's not that much older and can be a calming influence.
person lulu lemons
schedule April 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
please please please continue with this story, i love it! i love the plot, i love the pairings, i love everything please please continue i've been waiting for like... i dont know but please
schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You need to stop teasing me and finish the story. Naruto needs to fall for Neji because of what Naruto's promise to him was in the chuunin exams. He wanted to change the politics of the Hyuuga Clan and what better way than from the one who suffered the most of it? Neji needs someone and Naruto needs someone. Naruto happens upon a pretty depressed Neji and he cheers him up. The have a good ol' Bitch and Gripe session that leads to Neji kissing Naruto with all the air in his lungs. Naruto gives in to Neji and there you go! Naruto is happy, Neji is happy and all is well! Tenten then needs to be with Kankuro and or a cute, traveling, weapons maker and specialist. *Hint Hint, Wink Wink*
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. I found the dynamics of the Gaara and Sasuke friendship in the earlier chapters to be quite believable as well as enjoyable. Though i'm strictly a Naru*hina fan, i've found myself enthralled to your rather unconventional main relationship. Please, continue your efforts; they do not go unappreciated. P.S. I've seen many people suggest shino as a partner for Naruto; this isn't a bad pairing, but I'm not partial to the idea of thinking about someone who has swarms of bugs living in his body as being in a relationship that will most likely turn sexual.

I suggest adding an original character. Try being creative and making said character another jinchiriki(sp?). I agree, the effort may be staggering, but I wouldn't suggest it if I didn't think you could pull it off. ^_^