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for Ours to protect, Ours to love

by Trollmia

schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story, including the GaaraxSasuske relationship. please write more!
person Kryssie
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, it's interesting to see where this is going.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!!I am new to this site and stumbled upon your story. What an amazing story so far . I am excited to see more. i am a big fan of threesomes.As you can see if you read my fanfiction.net page i do alot of Team 8 threesomes. I like the combo of Gaara x Hinata x Sasuke.It was also refreshing to see a diffrent style storyline. Curious who you are going to pair Naruto with maybe Shino poor boy needs love LOL! I have only written one yaoi story and i paired shino x kiba but it was just a fluffy bunny oneshot. Still haven' been able to make a more lemon yaoi yet (blush) Well i look forward to your next chapter.
Moonwitch
person Abby
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you are still writing this. I love S/H/G and I wish there were more. Thanks so much, Abby
person rylolynn
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YeaY an update. Really enjoyed it...wants more... *hugs naruto* poor naruto, I think he deserves someone who can save him since he's always saving and trying to protect everyone else.
person cynaga
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm happy to see this unique story updated. Thanks~!!! :D
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. This is one of my all time favorites. As for pairing up Naruto, you kinda ran out of girls. Seems you have written a straight Naruto, so maybe an OC? Moegi will be too young, Shizune too old, Hana too old. Where is Sai, or doesn't he feature?

Well, can't wait to see what solution you come up with. Good luck.
person Legilmyth
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am really glad that you haven't given up on this story. I really enjoy it. I have a few idea's for a pairing for Naruto. A. Tenten can finally give up on neji, (but that doesn't seem probable) B. Kiba's sister Hana or C. Anko, she's a little crazy but she would have fun with him.

ANy way, I just wanted to say how much I like this story and am looking forward to more, when ever that might be.

Legilmyth
person gaara89
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty please continue this soon! This is really good!
person padoopadoop
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! I don't mind waiting for chapters because you always make it worth the wait. Poor Naruto! Maybe he and TenTen can be together? Keep up the good work!