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for Ours to protect, Ours to love

by Trollmia

person ....
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's very good...you haven't updated in a while, you should continue...I wonder, what will happen to Hanabi?
person frizzy197
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome, can't wait for next ch.
person Mic Mic
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aww I liked it a lot. Only thing is it seems like Gaara's become #2. Not necessarily in Hinata's heart but in the story. Most of the time Sasuke talks first, is in the front of Hinata, or is the one to make the first move. Maybe you could make it more even and not have one seem to be ahead of the other. I guess maybe I'm also feeling this way cause Gaara was in love with her first and it seems like Sasuke is intiating most of the interactions. Just a thought I hope you don't think of it as a put down to the fic because your characters are all well developed and I love the plot not to mention how you did well on them falling in love. Smart on Hanabi having some problems because if a woman had all that stuff on her while she was pregnant I'm sure she'd probably have some kind of problems during delivery. Update soon your fic rulez ^_~
Mic Mic
person Mic Mic
schedule August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ohh yes Hinata's not dead and finally a sharing fic that's written well and isn't just a one shot of smut though those are okay too ^_^ oh man but they would be cool for HInata I wodner what's up with her though. Seems like she's a ghost. Btw great writing and chappie ^^
Mic Mic
person Spirit of the Chihuahua
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for finally adding another chapter to this. I just love your stories and every single thing about them. I don't think I can really find any fault in this. Please do update again soon.
person curious_corbie
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WAHOO!!! i'm sooooooo glad that you added more. I have been waiting ever so paitently(i'm not the most paitent person). I can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve. :)

person Legilmyth
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! More story! I have been so looking forward to the day that you got inspired to write more on this one.
I can't wait to see what you have come up with!
person Raeshi
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. Really good plot. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Hinata is so gentle and loving. Although could they not kill Neji using his seal that he has? Gaara and Sasuke sharing, who would have thought!
person Spirit of the Chihuahua
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I began reading and just couldn't stop, there was so many things I was ment to do but this is just too good to stop reading. Words can not begin to describe how wonderful this is (that and my stunted vocabulary). But I do hope that someday soon you update. I can not wait for Hinata's answer and whatever may come of it.
person Sunny
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome! I sat here and read all 7 chapters tonight!! You really should continue it!! I loooove Hinata she is one of my favorite characters and while its still hard for me to wrap my hear around seeing her with anyone other than Naruto, I love reading different fan fiction like this! Great Great story!