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please never stop writing this story

I THINK YOU SHOULD BUT SOME SMUT IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! YAAAAAAAAAAAAA !!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!!!!!!!!

Ur probably right! After all a growing boy needs his sleep! ^^
As a pervert I say go for the smut! As a fangirl I still say go for the smut! But, regardless smut or no smut, i still can't wait for the next chapter! This chapter was definitely amusing. Normally I would never even think of a NejiTem pairing but they're extremely amusing and perhaps even a bit eccentric on their relationship, I think i LOVE you! They watched Battle Royale! The epitome of Sadistic Pleasure! Book and movie was awesome. Go You!
Yet again, GaaNaru or is it NaruGaa? Everchanging Semes and Ukes~! Yum! LoL! The whole festival was utterly and maybe even sickeningly adorable. Gaara is so polite, I need to give him a hug! >.< All the snack you described is making me hungry! T^T I want Crepes!!! XD
Until then UPDATE SOON~!! SMUT~~~~! =^-^=

yayness~
update!
haha..
m'so glad that naruto scored high & won the bet!
yosh!
gaara in adress..
nyahaha!
^^

Where to start? You have me in a very hard position with the pairing...I do like the Gaara/Naruto pairing but it is so painful to know that it is making Sasuke suffer. I usually dont read this king of fics as I prefer Boy/Girl fics but recently I have a penachant for Naru/Sasu fics. What brought this on ...How would I know. Nice plot, very well developed. All the characters have very adept personalities and you have a nice way to tune into this and bringing it out. I like it. Please update soon!

Woot! GaaNaru/NaruGaa(either)! Havent seen too many well-planned GaaNaru fics in a while. *praises you* Yum. Smut. (in Ch 10 anyway)
I love how you describe Naruto. He feels soo in character. Overly anxious, energetic and love-struck (commited too...) The fact that he's figthing for the seme position and instigating their "sessions" seems both realistic and amusing! Go Naruto!
Gaara *sigh* soo unloved yet so sadistic and lovable.
And yes, their heights! O_o! I was really surprised when Naruto was taller in this fic. Most of the time Naruto is made shorter as to justify his usually position as uke but wow! Gaara is pretty short and no one seems to awknowledge that (though Naruto WaS pretty short before too.)
Cant wait for the next chapter so update soon!

aww man, I'm kinda glad that Naruto didn't break up with Gaara. I thought it was heading towards that direction, but I guess I over-read some details. ^_^ keep it up, I love your story. If you have the time, can you email me when you have your next update? thanks in advance!

omgggg *cries for sasuke* ok, up until ch. 8 or something i was like alright, sasuke deserves this because hello, sasuke in reality is a jerk and took naruto for granted in this story... so you snooze you lose applies here. but omg, he has to witness the stuff in the bathroom, then naruto taunts him in his own house AND rejects him? ok, at least sasu wasn't hiding in naruto's apartment hearing those words to Gaara because MY heart broke into a million pieces. And I AM a SasuNaru freak, but I also believe in the happiness of ALL characters (nerd, nods, yes), so ugh, it breaks my heart that as happy as Gaara and Naruto are together... you're planning on SasuNaru? *criiies* At least Sasu sort of deserves it (and I love Sasu), but now Gaara's heart has to break after everything he's been through? OMG, please send me a teensy bit of fluff? But I do love it, I thought ch. 8 through 10 were just awesomely done. And I was never distracted by the scene/time changes or POV changes... I actually think it's better without the things indicating a change in POV since they sort of interrupt the flow. I think it's normal to switch POVs in different paragraphs, but then again, maybe I'm doing something wrong cuz I write that way, too...

oh and also since i haven't reviewed yet, lemme just say... your lemons are really hot and well described. it's not like "hi, i'm zoning out while writing a sex scene," it feels like you as the author are right there dealing with the scene and making it as realistic as possible through the physical actions! still though, m'heart hurts for sasuke soooo much. i actually want to hug him since naruto didn't.

yay!
an update!
*twirls around*
aww~
i really like the whole narugaanaru thingy goin' on,
but i can't help but feel sorry for sasuke..
he is a little pitiful..
ahehehe~
anyways, hope you write soon~
i'll be waiting!
^^

YES!!!!!! finally garaa and naruto! TOGATHER!!! HA!!! and they say mindcontrol dosent work. but anywho, THANK YOU. you have no idea how hard it is to find garaa/naruto. U R MY HERO!


P.S. I love !!! <---those things