rate_review Reviews

omg i love this lol you're really good keep up the good work i don't have any advice for you though sorry ^_^'

please update soon i'm dieing to know wat happens

hmmm for some reason that message gaara got sounds kinda fishy....

Yes, you're being /way/ too mean to Sasuke! Poor guy... Other than that, I like this story, it's got a nice plot, the bet is funny, and Naruto being with Gaara and then getting caught in the bathroom by Sasuke, though a little sad, was funny in it's own way, due to an inside joke.

Oh my God, even when you are writing something that is completely serious, it was hysterical and it didn't take away from the scene at all. I love your writing style and your new chapters were fantastic! Oh, and I completely agree with about rape fics being terrible so I'm really glad that you aren't going to include any of those situations in this fic. That would ruin this fic, and that would be a horrible thing to do to readers such as myself. I do have one request though, if you are going to do a change of scene, some stars or something would be a huge help because sometimes there are random large spaces between paragraphs and there isn’t a scene change, and sometimes there is. It would just be nice. Anyway though, keep up the great work. I eagerly await your next update.


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aww~
poor sasuke~
T_T

but that's ok, i dun think ur so mean or sumthin'..
ish okay with me~
^^

AWWWWWWWWW POOR SASUKE I CAINT HELP BUT FEEL SORRY FOR HIM!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOON!!!!

Man, I feel really bad for Sasuke. Even if he is a giant jerk. Can anyone say "breakdown" >_>

I'd vote for a Gaara rape in next chapter... mwhehehehehehe.. Sasuke being so angry rapes Gaara... yeah...would be really nice!

oh, wow.
that was hot~
*drools*

..loves it.