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by tasukigirl

person vanessa
schedule July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this AU fic the best I've read I really have nothing to say but plz write a lemon? and the results let naruto to be like 3rd in the whole school. since he has bee working so hard...update soon^^
person Yue
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm this is interesting. Naruto better win the bet -laughs-
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again, another beautiful chapter... nicely written (though I don't quite understand some of the strange capitalizations you choose to use sometimes), in my opinion and I simply love your humour. XD... I could read and re-read this story and still crack up. Stories like these are priceless.

Haha... Neji and Temari... never would've pegged what one either, to be honest. AH well. maybe that's just me. And honestly, I love how you made Neji - he's a treasure. What upsets me is how Sasuke seems much too childish and slightly too... possessive of Naruto, to the extent that he becomes embarassingly annoying. However, I shall ignore my feelings of loyalty towards my obsession of treating Sasuke like a god and assume that you have your reasons for making him seem that way - possibly something to do with the plot.

I honestly can't wait till the next chapter... august, huh? Damn.
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
kyaa! i'm gonna be bouncing impatiently waiting for you to get back lol!! this chapter was awesome, we finally found out a lot of 'what happened in middle school' and WOW!! and sakura being the one being told was cool, i'm glad she's not all rabid-killer-fangirl ^__^ her gettin pissed at sasuke for startin shit and throwing him out was hella awesome too XD i *loved* all her observations about things and how she must be losing it when she was looking for naruto lol (hmm.. it seems i'm kinda reviewing the chapter backwards lmao)

but my favorite part was the sasuke/neji confrontation:
“I’m warning you. Keep your hands off. He’s *mine*.”

“Does Uzumaki know that? Or did you forget to tell him. Again.”


ooooohhhh yeahhh *jealous possessive naive sasuke* sooooooooo can't wait for you to get back!! gahhh this story fuckin rocks.. and again i vote for naruto to win his part of the bet!! i really don't care who's seme/uke, i like even ground (like NaruGaaNaru, SasuNaruSasu, etc.) but EVERYBODY makes naruto uke and i wanna see him be "the guy" in a relationship w/his senpai, dammit!! nyaaa and to beat sasuke would be like icing on the cake!!

as for gaara, well i said last time i want him in the dress.. it'd be very lmao/cute.. but either way is fine really

neji.. i still don't know what he should win lol.. a weekend uninterrupted w/temari? for some reason i keep thinking neji's 'prize' should have to do with rubbing sasuke's face in.. well, everything XD *so mean*

so have fun on vacation, hurry back with more awesome ficcage!!

~ lg
person amber
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i really like this story
person Loqui
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I cant wait for more. And as for your questions:

1. Dont really care, both ways its pretty good.
2. He should win, the thought of Gaara in a dress is almost creapy
3. Neji has good eyes, maybe he should get to watch... *evil grin*

Whatever you decide Im sure it will be wonderful.
person avila7989
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ANOTHER AWSEOM CHAPTER!!!!!! I THINK GAARA SHOULD WIN AND NARUTO SHOULD LOSE!!! NARUTO IS A MUCH BEETER UKE (GIRL) THAN GAARA IS. GAARA LOOKS MORE LIKE THE DOMINETE TYPE. NARUTOS ALWAYS BLUSHING WHILE GAARA HAS A NICE COOL COMPOSURE!!
person Kellie
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story (since I'm a huge GaaraNarutoGaara fan). I think Naruto should win the bet with Neji losing.
person xBunni
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gaara should win and naru-chan should lose~!! ^^ Then gaara gets to cheer naru-chan up because naru-chan is just so spoofed that he couldn't beat sasuke!! Woot!! Hoorah for uke!naru-chan!! ^^ And I say neji... Will get a free day with just him and temari since those gaara wouldn't be at home and kankuoro can be... Out that particular day? ^^;; Please make naru-chan uke!! >< Onegai shimasu!! *begs*
person yaoigurl91
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. The story is getting good.