rate_review Reviews

I liked it very much! I've just read it again, and I think it's really beautiful. I like the idea of the double blade:)

This made me burst into tears almost as much as Naruto did! T.T
I really loved it! Im so glad i found it! Btw I thought it made perfect sence!

thank you for not making them jump right into a heated make-out session or something like that...this was much more believable...and it was sweet...

Wow, I liked it!
Good one-shot! ^^

ur cool.. the story was awesome, though it was short.. but still, i love it.. thanks for writing.. ^^

wow powerful! i like you can making it longer. maybe you should continue. i would like that. i thought that it was really good.

Great One-shot. Well done though I should point out something, Im not sure if anyone else caught this.....It kinda threw me off(if it didn't then I wouldn't say anything:P)
Here it is......
Sasuke just stared at him. He then lowered them on the bed, trying as he could to get into a comfortable position (A/N: mind out of the gutter, you twerps! Out of the gutter! Out! Now!!!), spooning the younger against him.

Okay so they are at the bed.....but then after some dialog you had this...
Sasuke gathered Naruto in his arms, carried him to the bed. The sheets were all over the place. They had brown patches every where, some were still lightly red and damp. Doesn’t look like it was in the wash for a long time…

uhhhh....he was already at the bed and was laying down beside Naruto.... Unless you were to switch them then that would make a little more sense. Brought to the bed then lowered. It doesn't make sense to lower then bring to the bed eh? :P

Anyways it was a good onesot, and I like how it was written....I look forward to reading your work again. Just keep in mind of the actions of the character
Ja ne!

this if my absolute favorite story. - i've had a copy saved at home for the past year!
this fic along with one other inspired me to write happy birthday, my fic.

it's even posted and completed!

i just could never refind it afterwards to leave a review. but i absolutely love this fic!

it's different, but it's nice. there are times when you just want to read a good story with guys, and then there are times where you just want sex and lots of it. This would be an example of the former (obviously, i mean, duh!) so, it was a fun read, and i totally understand how sometimes the story just writes itself and all you do is stare at the computer screen while it happens. i look forward to reading other stories of yours. good luck.

awwwwww, that was cute...sad but cute..i love it! i always end up writting stuff that stuck on my mind too it clears the mind don't it? ^^