rate_review Reviews

to be honest this story cought my attention because the title was german. Do yo speak german? for I would love to have someone to talk to! oh and I like the story!

i liked this one-shot a lot. it was so sweet but at the same time depressing. I could never picture naruto being suicidal cause hes so happy but after reading this its like i got to see another side i was blind to. glad u didnt put a lemon it wouldnt have seem to go well with this. And for once sakura wasnt a u know what. ^ ^

I thought it was wondeful and very emotional. I really liked the "Why" part where you had them think so many why questions, but left them all unasnwered. It was very deep. Great job, really. Nice work.

~Animehead

Hey
First a question: are you German?
just wondered 'cause of the title ;)
and second:
I hope you'll not be offended by anything I say now, but...
I think it's a bit... fast? dunno how to put it...
I mean... you explained everything, good reasons for Naruto's suicidal tendencies and stuff.. but feeling-wise it lacks a certain something.
I really don't know how I can explain this to you, but for me, it feels a bit..."shallow" (it's really not the vocab I'm looking for, but I can't quite find a fitting one, sorry ^^*)
I guess what I'm missing is a explanation for Sasuke's behaviour or...gah... it's really difficult to explain this *drop*

the other thing which kinda was... a disturbance, were the comments in brackets... it's one thing to do this in comedy fics and like you explained at the beginning it's what you write most of the time, ne? so I guess you're really used to do it, but I think it's not fitting for a darkfic, at least I feel that it disturbs the sad scene ppl see in their minds when they read the story.

BUT I don't want to just nag ^^*
'cause there were some things I really liked about this FF, or I wouldn't have reviewed ^^*
"“No… nngh… do-don’t leave… don’t stop… please don’t…” don’t humiliate me after this, don’t abandon me, don’t mock me, don’t leave me…
“I won’t…” I won’t leave you, I won’t hurt you, I won’t abandon you…"
this passage for example... I really liked how you let them finish the sentences in their thoughts ^^

so... well
like I said earlier, I hope you don't feel offended by whatI wrote
baba
Lithi ^^/)

PS: If you ARE German, feel free to e-mail me and I'll try to explain what I tried to express, cuz it's really difficult to do that in a foreign language ^^**

This is the best naruto suicide fics I've ever read! You're really great continue like this you're wonderfull!!!

Wow, this story ... one shot ... thing, was really very well done. i love the way you portrayed the character's emotions more through what they wanted to say as opposed to what they actually said. Wonderfully done, keep up the great work.

it made sense... but i don't understand what the title of this is... or what it means. maybe i'm just stupid though... hehehe... loved this, though. very well written.

-inc

-Cries- Oh, that was too sad, and too sweet. That was a real tear-jerker!

That was awesome. I loved it. Quick Q though: what's Selbstmordversuch mean? Sounds kinda Germanic or possibly Dutch. My email's sakura underscore laurel 6 6 6 at yahoo dot com, in case you wanna email me with the answer. Thanks for the great read!

this was an interesting and good fic. it was (for the most part) well written, and i liked it a lot. i'm wondering what the title meant, or if it was just a little random...? oh well. thanks for the good read!^^~