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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For some reason I kept thinking Neji and Naruto, I was surprised to see Shika. Good job.
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June 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At the beginning to middle, I soooo thought this was a SasuNaru pairing. But it was really good anyway. ShikaNeji is something I never really thought of before so I like the originality.
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March 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. Not only was this an amazing story, but I was baffled by the pairing at the end.. I could have sworn that the first-person was Naruto, and I was shifting between Sasuke(first choice) and Neji for the lover. I only guessed those two because of the term 'genius' and the mentioning of long, silky hair. Wow.. Shikamaru.. Wow.. Freaking amazing.. Continue writing! I would love to read another hidden character story from you!
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What the hell is wrong with you sick bastrd do you have any idea how much that it dissapointed me thats gross neji and shika I thought it was sasuke and naruto and yes I m picky on paring but none the less you best tell next time tell the hell who the parings are or so help me I will give you suc has burn it'll make you scared of me. love
Yai fix 96
Yai fix 96
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
^__^ i loved it
I love the pairing it ended up being, and really it did keep you guessing. At first i thought the genius was Sasuke, but pretty soon it became apparent it was Neji. The other character though i didn't know who it was, thinking maybe Naruto (or lee *shutters* or any other horrible pairing) but then the hair tie came in and i had no idea who it was. . .honestly, even though i love shika/neji, it was a complete surprise
very good ^_^
I love the pairing it ended up being, and really it did keep you guessing. At first i thought the genius was Sasuke, but pretty soon it became apparent it was Neji. The other character though i didn't know who it was, thinking maybe Naruto (or lee *shutters* or any other horrible pairing) but then the hair tie came in and i had no idea who it was. . .honestly, even though i love shika/neji, it was a complete surprise
very good ^_^
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it. I knew it was Neji from the start, but i thought the other was sasuke. I couldn't tell which one was going to be seme or uke till the end, and then the part about long hair gave away who the uke was. It wasn't until the hair-tie part that I knew it was Shikamaru. Good job, you should write more.
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March 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great job hiding it, i honestly thought it was narusasu.
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January 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I knew it was uke Neji someone, but i thought the seme was Naruto, a NaruNeji. Write more me like ShikaNeji.
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really great, it was really hott and sexy, but still really sweet and cute XD I'm a bit stuck on a NaruSasu, SasuNaru kick right now so I imagined it to be them... but I had a feeling right from the beggining (from ur disclaimers) that it was gonna be a pairing with either one or both Shika and Neji... I really liked it though... I think I might read it again and see those two in my head this time intead of NaruSasu... XD
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December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was really great, it was really hott and sexy, but still really sweet and cute XD I'm a bit stuck on a NaruSasu, SasuNaru kick right now so I imagined it to be them... but I had a feeling right from the beggining (from ur disclaimers) that it was gonna be a pairing with either one or both Shika and Neji... I really liked it though... I think I might read it again and see those two in my head this time intead of NaruSasu... ^_^