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June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I admit, I thought it was Sasuke and Naruto at first. Seemed like one talked too much and the other too little. Then I thought it was Sasuke and Shika. Girls fighting to sit next to the latter and the other was a genius. Never guessed it was Neji and Shika. Good job.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
god...i really wasnt expecting that pair....i honestly thought that it was sasuke and naruto....damn
i never thought about that pairing.....its a good one....
as for the story...i loved it....it was very well written...and it did have me guessing until the very end...
...ive got to say youre one of my favorite writers here on aff...make another story soon please!
i never thought about that pairing.....its a good one....
as for the story...i loved it....it was very well written...and it did have me guessing until the very end...
...ive got to say youre one of my favorite writers here on aff...make another story soon please!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, was that hot, or what? ;)
Seriously, very smexy, and I was sure at the beginning it was Naruto with Sasuke, somewhere past the middle of the story I started to think it was Naruto with Neji, and just nearing the end it ocurred to me that maybe it's not Naruto at all! I realized it was Shikamaru only when you mentioned the hairtie... Great fic, really smoothly written.
Seriously, very smexy, and I was sure at the beginning it was Naruto with Sasuke, somewhere past the middle of the story I started to think it was Naruto with Neji, and just nearing the end it ocurred to me that maybe it's not Naruto at all! I realized it was Shikamaru only when you mentioned the hairtie... Great fic, really smoothly written.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o that was brilliant! half way thru it i thought it was sasuke and naruto lol!! and then neji and sasuke haha i mean pale skin=sasuke or neji xD but then when u said he removed his hair tie i was like kyaaa shika!! haha i knew neji was at the bottom when you said long hair n all but gah u had me guessing 4 a while very very good i couldnt do better if i tried ^^. you recieve a ten on this one foh sho anddd a gold star! yay! haha [i can b such a dork at times ^^ gomen] ja!
--ruby
--ruby
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!! that was sooo good i thought it was about sasuke and naruto until i got to the end. It was Great!!!!!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was sooo sure it was NaruSasu XD Great job!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, I loved this. I figured it was neiji but I didnt even know till the end that the other was shikamaru. Even the "troublesome" comment didnt clue me in. I thought it could have been Naruto up until the whole letting the hair down thing. Annnnnyhoo, loved it. Keep up the good work.
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!!1!1 THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' HOT AND I THOUGH IT WAS NEJI/SASUKE BUT IT SHIKA/NEJI!!
wahhhhhhhhhh
but besides the pairing, this story was wonderfully written. I like how you had the beginning, and then backtracked to the events that led fully into the lemon.
this is the second greatest shocker since Gai/Naruto, written in a similar, mysterious character format...
nice jobbbbbb!!
ARE YOU KIDDING ME?!!1!1 THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' HOT AND I THOUGH IT WAS NEJI/SASUKE BUT IT SHIKA/NEJI!!
wahhhhhhhhhh
but besides the pairing, this story was wonderfully written. I like how you had the beginning, and then backtracked to the events that led fully into the lemon.
this is the second greatest shocker since Gai/Naruto, written in a similar, mysterious character format...
nice jobbbbbb!!
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June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man that was sooo hot! ::fans myself:: You are one great writer! I guessed Neji right but I thought the other one was sauske.