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Hrm... well, I suppose I liked this story.. but... just...just.. AH! Naruto was SO pathetic! It makes me want to scream. If someone was actually getting raped, they wouldnt want more! Even if they liked the person, even if they had been with the person, rape is never okay! It is so traumatizing. I was traumatized by this story, you did such a good job with the details. ( for the most part ) but OMG! Pathetic Naruto much? *falls over and dies* and also, its not like he'd just get over it! since he was being all pathetic and what not I would have expected him more to slip on his clothes, or maybe not even that and just crawl in a corner and cry. heck, even a non-pathetic person would do that! And then he could get mad. Very mad. = demon fox killing time. yes. Destroying the Sasuke. Which! if you take off the sas leaves uke. Evil sasuke seme. *stabs sasuke* and yeah, I dont care if Im ranting! This story evoked a lot in me and I have to get it the hell out! OMG *dies some more and leaves you alone in her deadness* on secondthought... *comes back as a poltergeist and killifies sasuke and sends him to hell. then goes up to hell for commiting murder* but it was soooo worth it. my poor Naruto.

Dark. I liked it.

One thing for sure, your grammar sucks!! You can't spell and you definitely don't know how to punctuate..

The stories ok and not soo bad, but due to your grammar, it kinda ruins the whole appeal to the story..

man....that was a really fucked up side of sasuke. i have to admit it was really scary, creepy, and a real turn on too. nice!!

Well, I've read your fanfic and I'm glad I did, cos after that I hated Sasuke so much - I won 5 matches of "Narutimate Hero" against our lockal town champion (champion played Sasuke and i played Naruto). I won't say I like your fic, cos I don't like OOC much, and your Sasuke and Naruto are a LOT OOC. Sasuke is an evil version of Orochimaru and Naruto is a male, loud version of Hinata. I wonder where this weak, crying, submissive Naruto came from. Well, may be if you didn’t read manga or watch anime…well, he could be from fanon, though, this Naruto is rather annoying – cos you wait one reaction from Naruto, and get completely another! (For example – why didn’t he think that this Sasuke (Sasuke he’ve never knew before (sadistic) and that’s saying something cos they know each other since they were 9-8)might be someone who henged Sasuke (that means Real Sasuke could be somewhere tortured or even dead)? Why didn’t he use Kyuubi? Why didn’t he continue struggling, even if it’s pointless, when Naruto known for his (not so) pointless struggling? Why didn’t he tried to break the chains – sure he wouldn’t be able to do this - but he can break some of his own bones and free his hands. I mean, come on, his Rival Sasuke starts to win – and Naruto just whimpers and do nothing! So that’s my opinion – you should work better with characters. My mail - meow123321@yahoo.com if you have something to say you are welcome.

die sasuke how could u do that to poor naruto-kun

i loved it

Ahh!! Ilove so much!! You have to continue!! =D In the later chaoters..you should get Naruto to be begging for it almost everyday!! Kukuku...how kinky. 8] Hope you'll update soon! -Prays its not a one-shot-.

UR A SADISTIC BASTARD!

Wow... that was fuckin awsome. You are crude and deprived and i loved your story.