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for Twisted

by Darkplaygirl

person Neko-Chan
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
shit, that was kinky!! and quite a twist in ending ^_^ i like it!
person ki-ka
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey~kagome..will you think about adding this in to your plot about naruto getting revenge on sasuke..or have itachi come in..have him watching how sasuke is treating naruto and decides to have fun with that...ohhh new level ^_^...if yu decide to use this idea..i personally like yur story so far..yu have a begining now now yu need a middle and a end..for the whats next feature...until next chappie-new loyal fan
person crossXmyXheart
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hey well this story is really werid but thats cool i think you need to update now!
person Shosuro
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Love the First part. I think maybe give Naruto a graving that he can't get out of his system... no matter what he does.... give a taunting Sasuke who starts to care for Naruto..... I love the NaruSasu!!!! Hope this will help your writers block!!!
person xBunni
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Very.. Graphic~ ^^ Demo I enjoyed it, sadistic sasuke~ What fun, ne~ ^^ Hehe. It would've been better if there were more.. Toys though, na no~ And the ending was also a little abrupt~ ^^;; If sasuke stayed infatuated with naru-chan then it would've made a very good series actually~ ^^ Over all though, I love your style!! Good job! ^^
person Elric Maxwell
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this was very good! Is this a one-shot, or is there more? ^_^ EM
person Kagome
schedule June 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... lots of people like it.... I guess I could continue it....... SURE!!! WHAT THE HELL? *Gets to typing*
person Hinata
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this story is pretty intense, Sasuke kidnapping Naruto is always very hot! Well hope you continue this in some ways. I want to found out if Sasuke actually does love Naruto, or if he's just playing with him. And Sakura, well she's ok in thi fic, but she can't get in the way of SasukexNaruto. This fics caught my attention and I want to see more of it!
person Inuyasha_is_mine
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.o oh my this was truly twisted indeed xD poor naruto total hotness tho. id so let myself b tortured n all that by sasuke *drools* awesome job hope to see more ^^ ja!
--ruby
person Rakuen
schedule June 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking awsome!
-shivers-
I-I-I...
I can't even speak right now. lol
Wow that was defidently the best rape/lemon/yaoi/everything fic I have ever read!!!!!!
I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!
OMG OMGOMG
Yahoo me at rakuenkitsune, we'll chat or maybe RP some lol
-Rakuen