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person Meemei
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You could have them like:

Lee- PLayer (as in the guys who get girls but don't even really care about them and then they cheat on them with other girls)
Neji- Kurenai Sensei
TenTen- Ino

Kiba- Kitty Cat
Shino- Pimp

Ino- Asuma Sensei
Chouji- one of those creepy looking Fortune-Tellers
Shikamaru- Dominatrix(whips and chans baby, whips and chains)


Gaara-Pop Idol Singer(like Brittney Spears or Christina Aguilera)
Kankuro- Hooker(or Prostitute)
Temari-a boy

Kakashi- The headless horesman
Iruka- Belly Dancer
Kurenai-Gangster
Asuma- The Hokage
Tsunade- Jiraiya

You don't have to do those, it's just a suggestion.
person KakashiSanzo5790
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit!
i love this story sooooooooo much! ^.^
it makes me really happy to read it! ^.^
sasuke as a geisha.......thats something that i would really like to see in the anime...like that would ever happen!
your welcome for the costume suggestions although they all blew T.T....i hope i helped a little bit!
ill be watching for an update....so please update soon! ^.^
person Ayako
schedule July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol this story is pretty good so far
person COSTUME HELP IS HERE
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe you should dress all the sensais up as their ememys for instance Kakashi as Gai and Iruka as who ever his enemy is and such which and forth what lol and Lee should have to dress up as Sasuke and such you know dress them up as the people who they didnt get along with lol oh Gaara should have to be Temari and so on.
person MORE COSTUME IDEAS
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lee - Sasuke (cuz their enemys lol or Kakashi)
Neji - itachi (hes already go the hair)
TenTen - Temari

Kiba - CAT (It would sooo piss him off hehe it would be funny)
Shino - (hmm tough one) but i think he should be either like a shado (compleatly black outfit and face paint lolz) or a spy hehe

Ino - Tsunade or a pig hard decision
Chouji - a potato chip (single potato chip hehe interesting)
Shikamaru - IRUKA (hes already got the hair)

Gaara - the sand man (like pointy hat and long black robe or something)
Kankuro - Inuit like a dog sleder
Temari - Tenten

Kakashi - (tough one) i say a character form Icha Icha lol like someone dressed in pink frilly langerie
Iruka - Shikamaru (if ur planin on puttin any Iru/Kaka in it then him and Shika would confuze the hell out of Kakashi hehe im evil i know)
Kurenai - An old lady (i dont know make her knit or something)
Asuma - hehe a bearded lady (possibly could work)
Tsunade - A tube of lipstick or lipcolor or something lolz or you could just dress her up in the hokage like wiht a grey wig and her pipe and put the hat on and stuff


PS I LURVES THE STORRY SOO MUCH UPDATE SOON
person Mija
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My feable suggestions for costumes....le sigh, Im so lame sometimes its sad really.....

Lee= monk, he has the hair for a english sort of monk but you can make him into a japanese one, I made him into a butterfly in my fic or was it a flower?? lol all that green and orange just had me thinking flower so might of been flower lol, so you could make him a flower or butterfly or bee.
Neji=I would like to see Neji dressed like a girl, antoher geisha lol, but he is so hard to peg as well, how bout an old samurai warrior? from thier history?
TenTen=princess, or how bout Anko? I mean making her look like Anko lol

Kiba=ok Kiba would also make a good barbarian or a dog, how bout a wolf? or some sort of animal demon as well? and where is Hinata? do you have a dress fro her I mean costume?
Shino=hokage robes and hat, will help hide his face and let him keep his glasses on, also you could make him into some sort of insect spider? mosquito? lol

Ino=how bout diedra from Akatsuki? they always did remind me of each other, if not make her look like NARUTO lol they both have blond hair and blue eyes
Chouji=sumo wrestler or caveman sort of thing? I had him be a barbarian sort of thing in a halloween fic I wrote, but I had added alot of costumes like shieks and genie sort of garb
Shikamaru=always thought he looked like Iruka, make him a minu Iruka lol

Gaara=hard one, could make him a panda lol, or how bout Shakuku? or mini Kankaru lol, but seriously too cute
Kankuro=isnt his regular ninja wear a costume enough? lol, how bout making HIM look like an older Gaara, would go so well with mini him played by Gaara lol
Temari=dress her like a guy..thinking Sakura shouldnt be the only one dressed as a male, lol

Kakashi=dress him like Jiraiya lol his favorite author
Iruka=how bout Anbu costume except have him have the mask at his waist...think he would look adorable in Anbu gear
Kurenai=how bout some sort of japanese demon, cross between a harpie sort of thing? or a snake? she has creepy red eyes that remind me of a demon
Asuma=dress him like Kurenai, lol I mean think about it, with his beard it would just bee tooo funneh..anyway Im lost on him so that was all I could think of
Tsunade=she could just drop her age defying jutsu and be the old woman she is?? lol, or she could be TonTon lol, sorry, she is hard to peg, would she wear anything but something sexy or regal? I mean she IS the one making the rules..so what would she pick for herself? If you havent already done it to Naruto how bout making her look like the Yondaime? the 4th hokage? she has blonde hair right??? unsure, manga is in black and white lol.


ok this is all I could think of, Im not to creative and I have no clue about what they would and would not have seen or known in thier time line so it does throw me for a loop, hope you find some help in all that somewhere, even if one of them helps I will consider myself glad to have helped in someway, if not then Im sorry that I could not be so helpful, looking foward to more, hope you update soon, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Mija
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok just had a few other thoughts....since Shika is lazy he would definitly make a good Iruka cause all he would have to do is add the scare, but I already suggested that in my previous post, but the other Idea for him would be how bout his jammies and a pillow?? you know lazy and all? and yes thinking Kankuro as a kabuki would be cool as well..liked that idea, but thinking now that Asuma could also be Sandaime, he was at the Chuunin exam that year and Asuma has the beard just make it grey with paint or dye and he can smoke a pipe instead of a cigg...anyhow those were my added ones...and you could always make Neji be dressed like Sakura, pink hair lol..seriously Sasuke cant be the ONLY male in drag...well he can but Im thinking poor him lol...anyhow lame again but just thought to add for more help huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Ano
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, ill try to help with costumes...
What about making Gaara into little red riding hood? Ether that or Chucky so he wont have to change his appearence much..(and i doubt he'd come as little red riding hood)..
I've read some of the other revieuws and if someone should go as a bondage kid i think it should be Kakashi considering hes the perv.
Arg..i'm getting blanks here myself..though if i think of something else..i'd revieuw again..
I hope it helped although i (think) only made one new sugestion..
person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...Gaara as a panda would kick ass! Well, not kick ass as much as look freaking ADORABLE! ^__^ I'm sorry, that's all I can think of right now.
person Yaminai
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think the story is actually an awesome "what if" idea, though I was wondering why

well, you can always go to the various zodiacs for inspiration.

For example, Iruka 's name is water-related, so i would have him dressed as possibly a fish (pisces) a merman/ mermaid, a dolphin, or even just a water-carrier (aquarius), and if you wanted a kakashi/ iruka pairing you could have the two roughly match.
Kakashi's name means scarecrow, or to match with iruka you could do a fisherman.
Ino or Temari I pictured as a Harem girl or a bellydancer, or randomly she would be a teddy bear. Because of her fan and the spots of it I say you could easily pass her off to be an albino peacock.

Chouji...i'm pretty sure you could put him in a horse costume--really strong and kind, but will eat all day if left alone.
Shika should be dressed as Iruka, they look waaaay too much alike not to pass up the chance.
Neji...I could picture him dressed as either a fortune teller or a Hong Kong Fooie-like character.
Dress Gai up like Jiraiya, I'd like to see the Sannin's reaction...
Tenten I would picture as the princess from the first movie or the princess she played in the set of movies (can't think of her name, the one who was involved with the seven-colored Chakra?).
I could picture Kiba in a Tonton costume, just for the juxtaposition to Akamaru (who could be dressed as either a housecat or a lion).

Well, that's all i can think of for now.