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for Drop the soap

by Trollmia

person blisblop
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a riot,I have always wondered about the lack of but plugs but on a site that has guys walking around after being rape...with sharp objects well....I thought most just made this up.I have that plug.Yeehaaqw.This is a riot,sharp.Kudos.
person lo
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. This is not the typical sex scene formula, I like that. You actually have a mind of your own. great pwp!
person Hellagoddess
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i laughed and laughed and laughed! This was awesome! I like the mild ponyplay too and Naruto saying Yeehaa and slapping him just made me crack up all over again!

*wipes tears from eyes* Awesome! Well done... *chuckles again thinking about it*

Hellagoddess
person Pic's Pixie
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo nice sequel :P still poor naru wasn't technically a seme but instead of arguing that he should have been I'm going to root for another sequel maybe one where sasukekun will seek delicious revenge, poor uke naru :P lol but up to you, great story