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January 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Reeeealy need to update this. It a wonderful idea, even though the plot hasn't come completely out yet. Besides, I want to read more of this story. Please,Please,Please! With M&M's on top!
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January 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh dang, this looks cool. i love a biker gang styled Naruto, with tattoos (any piercings?) who just so happens to be very dangerous and smokin' HOT! oh yeah, love this fic. Where's the next chapter, already?
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
mucho hearts to ya~! your grammar actually improved bit by bit, so it's not that horrible. i particularly liked the way that you manage to leave cliffhangers in almost every chapter. i just hope that you add more, writing-wise, as opposed to just plain conversations. i look forward to your next update (XD)!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I hate cliffhangers, but I'll forgive if you update soon, this story seems interesting enough to keep me here and reviewing for a while so keep it going!
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another chapter! But.. also another cliffy!!! Damn it! What is Naruto getting himself into???? :sniff: nothings going to happen to the cutiest character now right? ...*then again, he was bleeding at the last part* Update soon if can!
Inus_Kagome_Forever
Inus_Kagome_Forever
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September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aack... wonderful, as always. you have me hooked and i cant seem to shake it off. i love it and thanks for the e-mail!
lilithwolf@excite.com
lilithwolf@excite.com
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September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg, why's naruto bleeding?!! oh, i need the next chapter! hurry, the suspense is killing me! ^_~
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September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
update please!!!!
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September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more more more more more! a few grammer errors, but otherwise, the story is sound and complete! i love it and cant wait to read more! -puppy eyes you-
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is great so far and I cant wait for more!