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my first reaction after I read the first chapter was like "I must review!" the authoress(being you) and the story is interesting, and there's a lot of explaining to do?...the cliffie in the last chapter wasn't that bad compared to the first one, anyway I've seen a lot of people trying to experiment with the "after so many years naruto dramatically changes" but yours is by far the most enjoyed. and I like that, update soon:), and there seriously needs some action and more flirtation up in this joint, AND Damn! this is freaking long! okay so I'll stop typing this freakishly long review...as soon as my fingers stop as well :P
[anessavanella@aim.com]

oh I forgot about one more thing, the sketch was so...........................................(I really have no words for it, really) okay so it was so(I could stay here all day looking for a good word, you know how to put this...) really great sketch into forming words...................................it was hot! nice! really great! gangstalicious!...........WOW() ()
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[anessavanella@aim.com]

Is there something wrong with the ink? Is it a drug syndicate disguised as a tattoo parlor? Is Sai hiding feelings for Naruto? Did Itachi and Kisame like...rape Naruto or something? I mean they did say "plaY"......^^;......... KEEP UPDATING! T_T

Great story.This is a story line that I haven't read before. I enjoyed how you wrote out each character! The reason why Naruto disappeared sound so mysterious.. Sai sounds interesting, is Jealous!Sasuke going to appear alot? Can't wait for next chapter. Keep up the great work!

Oooo, interested, yes very interested! Can't wait for more! I really hope you update soon! For now I guess I'll go check out your other stories! and if you could, please e-mail me when you update?

Inus_Kagome_Forever

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Woot!! Ashrey-san is a mega uke naru-chan fan too??!! OO Yosh!! Ja, I guess I'll let this fic slip past the non-naru-uke filter~ [not that it hasn't already since I'm pretty much hooked, na no.. ^^''] And I really enjoyed this fic!! Oh oh!! Will it have sainaru? OO *begs and pleads and offers many many plates of dango* I really love reading it in sasuke's pov because he's just so possessive and easily jealous na no da~!! ^^ Hehe~ Mou... Cliffy?? OO Nuuuuuu~ Guess I'll just have to wait, ne~? ^^ Ma, gambatte ashrey-san!! ^^

ooo i no u will try ur best to draw sasuke ^^..and i absolutely loved this chapter! it gets more interesting by the second! cant wait to see why naruto is hiding so many secrets..haha sasuke is so in denial hes so jealous its written all over his face ^^..cant wait to see what kiba-kun found out about naruto and what itachi n kisame have to do with naruto as well o.o..yay!! until next time ne? ja!
--ruby

i really like it i mean it actually has a plot/story line and that's wonderful!!
a great way to start ur first sasunaru fan fic :D
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz put up another chapter soon caz i'd love u like 4
fuckin ever
much luck with ur writing

Sugoi desu!! oo *attemps to glomp teh smexy smexy naru-chan sketch* I love that sketch!! It's really good na no~!! [hai!! sakuma ryuichi-sama indeed!!] Demo I will still stick to being the devoted uke naru-chan fangirl that I am!! ... But because I love ashrey-san's fics so much [namely Different Angle most~ ^^ ashrey-san can guess why, I'm sure] and this one is no expection, I shall continue to read it and accept the 80% that I must read in compensation for the 20%~ ^^ Heh~ Good work though, I loved this chappie!! I shall forgive the earlier cliffy ending~ ^^ A lot of foreshadowing too in this chappie, ne? ^^ I've got my guesses already demo seems I'll just have to wait to see the answers, dakara gambatte ne, ashrey-san~!! ^^