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for Dragon Parlor

by Ashrey

person Mimi Hyuuga
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good start! I can't wait for the next chapter - leaving a cliffie at the end of the first chapter is wonderfully evil, hehe. I like you're style - I wonder, just how sexy has Naruto gotten? I'm looking forward to the next chapter, great work on the first! ^_^
person Kellie
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I wonder why Naruto was gone for so long. I'm looking forward to the next chapter ^__^