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Hey DB,this is very interesting,Itachi is agressive and sasuke is blushing..yup looks cool.Soooooooooo,where is the rest.Who is on the bed?Oh please say Itachi,please let the guys share a bunk house.Yeah!Is he a C or CIT?

cool!! i love it (write more)!

Is it only me or are the chapters too short?? 0__o Maybe it's just my imagination...anyway! I really like your story, update soon! ^^

I was high on Caffeine ^^ and so were my fingers

OK OK OK...continue....NOW. Damn, tis good. Detail will make it exceptional...thoughts of the characters are key! BUT I LIKEY, and the story got a helluva lots better when Don Quan Itachi appeared. WOOT *waves itasasu flag* So get going and make us drool, causeeeeee its our lot in life to do so...*drools*

Hello!
I'm glad you updated your fic
so quickly makes me looking for good
fics that much easier...

Oh uh by the way....

did you'r summary say anything
about a cross-over because I could've
sworn the Inoue Orihime was a character from the anime BLEACH

It may have been in early April that I had decided that I myself should write a story about camp. but I never got to it and it turned out that I was having thoughts on just making it a challenge for the readers over here. But I haven't been able to do that neither. I'm so glad that you are writing one. I'll try and support you as best as I can. I already like it. Do you already have plans on how they will be camping out? Like under the stars.... or in a cabin. I've always camped in cabins; but I'd LOVE to actually camp on the grounds. It would be so awesome. okay, I'm not going to assume that you've already been camping, so let me tell you something important. Within just THREE days of camping, you'll go through about 10 pairs of socks. Depending upon how active you are. If the grounds are marshy/wet, then you'lll go through about 17. So always remember to pack a LOT of socks. Especially b/c there really isn't a place where you can wash them and hang them to dry for later. You need to provide your own toiletries (Soap, shampoo, brush, toothpaste, and such), flip flops, blanket and pillow, and several extra clothing. Hmmmmm, maybe I /should/ write my own camping story? Hmm, maybe later. Much MUCH later. Also, and I really hope you don¡¯t mind my jabbering, they should have flashlights with them. You need them to see through the dark when you make your way from your cabin to the mess hall (where you eat or have meetings). At my camp, they have the cabins almost a mile away from the eating hall. AND they have this enormous lake that someone can fall into if they were careless and they were running to the hall ¡­..oh lets say at 5:40 in the morning (YES. We DID wake up that early.) so yes, flashlights are a GREAT idea. Everyone needs a chaperone. It doesn¡¯t matter if you are 17 years old. You will be in a small group that consists as little as 4 ppl and you¡¯d be given a chaperone that could be 40 years old, or as young as 16. Your chaperone MUST know where you are at ALL times. Otherwise, they¡¯d be in a lot of trouble, or if you were to sneak off in the middle of the night, you¡¯d be kicked out. You have to PRAY that you get one of those laid back leaders. Like Kakashi. Iruka would be fine too. Anko would be scary. Male instructors for guys, girls instructors for girls. Most common thing they have for breakfast would be Eggs, Fruit, bread, juice, and believe it or not, doughnuts. Lunch could consist of Salads, chips and dip, juice, fruit, fruit bars, Peanut butter sandwiches, or bread with lunch meat. Dinner- Hamburgers, chips, sodas, maybe pizza, Rice with beans, mixed rice with veggies, salads, grilled chicken. Alright, those are just some of the foods that we¡¯ve had. You obviously don¡¯t need to add them to your list, but you can. Gomen, this is taking way longer than I intended. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. ^.~

¡ÖRia =^-^=

Also, If you'd like, I don't mind beta-ing your work for you. The offer is up, just so you know.

Happy writing *huggles*


Ria ^^

hahahahahahaha,waff,awwwwww,etc,etc greaaaaaaaaat story please update soon actually like do it. now

You definately need it beta read, honestly... Like with the threw/through mistake.
The story starts nice but it's difficult to read it with all the stylistical and grammatical mistakes, I'm sorry to say that.
Don't get me wrong, I'm not flaming you. Just get a beta and it's going to be ok :)