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for Konoha Camp

by dustbunny690

person Rei
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its seems intresting enough....coudl be longer.
person Anon70149
schedule June 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, if you're seeking reviews and visits to your story, you might want to do the following:

+In the summary, capitalize the first letter of names
+In the story, not use chat talk (ie. "u" "ur")

Anon70149