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so nglad you're back! love this story loads
about what to do about the next few chappies
if you just make the lemony parts their own chapter then whoever doesnt want to read it can just skip over it unless there is a lot of dialogue in them that not reading would be confusing
either way youve given us good warning
i think you should put it up

A nice continuation to a great story! Thanks~!

oh my god oh my god ohmy......i cant even talk!
I literally screamed when i saw you updated!!

Thank GOD!
Best threesome ever!

Ok i will come back with a concrit when i can think

If you would like some help I have a whole slew of writers in my pocket that i can trick out for ya
Im not so bad myself

there are plenty of people who just want to see more updates from this fabulous story so we are more then willing to help out. I actually run a workshop on narutofan forums for lemon writers and i try to get as many writers as possible involved in the process.

Oh also since your feeling in the writing mood again. An author here in AFF named Harlita is trying to start this sort of round robin thing a story that all of us can get in on together. It really interested me when I heard about it so I got J-pop princess in on it, and thatreevesgirl/lemondrop as well. Im contemplating getting leafy girl (forcing her) to join in but she can be rather shy about lemons. Since all of the authors who are getting in on this are lemon writers you can imagine this story is going to be pretty far in the gutter. I think we would get excommunicated if we even thought of posting it on FFnet

If you want to take me up on the help offer or if you want to get in on the round robin just let me know, you can contact my MSN messenger or email me at Krickitat at hotmail dot com

And thanks again for your awesome update
Krickitat

Please continue it is too funny!

thank you thank you thank you for finally updating. you have no idea how excited i was when i saw that this had been updated. i hope you can work everything out and that you update soon. this story is too good to be left unfinished.

very very nice

hope you update soon

god, kakashi sakura and kiba together... yes please xd.

Okay, so I just about fell over when I saw that you had updated this! On that note, regarding your soon to be chapters- I think that you are fully capable of doing gritter things without offending your readers. If they allow the story to flow instead of becoming jarring then you should use them. With Sakura going into Anbu, we should be well aware that the possiblities of rape are high, regardless of her strength.

dude that was awesome, update soon!!!

You've made me realize just how much of a shame it is that we can't add stories as favorites in our profiles. Thank you for helping me to find another good author on this site. The story was excellent.