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for Teach Me

by bean1498

person Anon
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was amazing. I need to change my underwear after this story. First time I read any Kiba smut and definately the first time I am reading any bi- Kakashi material. I must read more!
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I know that you tend to have long amounts of time between updates, but I just want to say that this is one of my FAVORITE stories on all of AFF, and am hoping an extra review might egg you into writing faster. Please? I really do love this story, and can't wait for the next update.
person Plot aficionado
schedule October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That has got to be one some of the best smut I've ever read. You don't rush it, you don't slow it down with flowery words. It's perfect.
person erica_chan
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WUAUU!!!, SO HOT!! I WANNA A SAKURA X KAKASHI NEXT TIME PLEASE!!!!!!
person Sarah
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was freaking awesome.
schedule September 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, I am SO excited that you wrote a decent fic with Kiba because I LOVE Kiba and you don't see enough good fics with him. (I say the same thing about Shikamaru but that's a whole other rant.) I'm not much for boy on boy action but that last chapter was quite yummy, but how could it not be? Kakashi was in it! By far my favorite part is Sakura's first time. The whole scene was freakin sexy. (especially the oral. Mmm mmm mmm!) Darn you for cutting it short! I would really like to see the two of them get another chance to be alone so Kiba can really have his way with her! And do I sense you introducing Sasuke into the plot? If he keeps gets jealous like that, he may just have to do something about it!
person Ebony
schedule September 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you, Monkey Lady! GREAT FIC! Please tell me there's more coming. I've never thought about a kaka/saku/kiba threesome before but now I'm hooked! Keep up the outstanding work! :)
person Hiashi-sama
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You made me like KibaSaku!^_^
person Because I Can
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow u know as a strait guy i'm not really into the holw yaoi thing. But Damn Girl that was hot.
person Kamesha
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
IMAO.I know your wondering why I started with a laugh.It's something I did before this.I was going throught the undated story and I click on one and at the last minutE I saw that you had update.I damn near had a fit trying to go back so I could read the story.imao