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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o m g you are too good i never thought of the suku/kiba pairing and i love it and sasuke admitting he wants her and had slept with naruto priceless
ps i might just have to steal that line : what were you expecting, prettier words, instructions, a demonstration?
this story is quickly becoming one of my favorites
ps i might just have to steal that line : what were you expecting, prettier words, instructions, a demonstration?
this story is quickly becoming one of my favorites
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July 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!
kakashi alone = hot, sexy, gorgeous!
kiba alone = utterly sexy, great, a god!
but both of them together = you can't tell in words! lucky sakura ^^
i really really like your writing style and the story!
kakashi alone = hot, sexy, gorgeous!
kiba alone = utterly sexy, great, a god!
but both of them together = you can't tell in words! lucky sakura ^^
i really really like your writing style and the story!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please continue. I really like this because you get the characters personality exactly on the dot. Well at least what I feel the characters are like at an older age. Well thats all I have to say, happy writing and wish you luck with an update.
Later...
-Yashe
Later...
-Yashe
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ga ga ga gaaaaaa *scoops brains together* ga...
Holy sweet mother of god.
I've read a lot of Naruto fiction... and I'm not a huge fan of Sakura... but goddamn. *grins wickedly* Now, if we could only see a chapter of Kakashi and Kiba with Sakura watching. Hmm... I'd like that. For now, I'll contend with a cold shower.
Wicked job. Absa-fucking-lutely amazing.
Holy sweet mother of god.
I've read a lot of Naruto fiction... and I'm not a huge fan of Sakura... but goddamn. *grins wickedly* Now, if we could only see a chapter of Kakashi and Kiba with Sakura watching. Hmm... I'd like that. For now, I'll contend with a cold shower.
Wicked job. Absa-fucking-lutely amazing.
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July 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Your writing style is simply phenom. You manage to describe everything so well and so sensually. It's definately sexy in itself.
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like it^^ Update soon, it's really good!
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome! angsty sasuke is awesome :P maybe him and sakura shoudl get some action too XD
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can't process normal thought at the moment. Holy freaking cow! that was amazing!!!!! Lucky lucky Sakura. Very very hot and great, and just wow, my brain is smut induced mush. Amazing job.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm a HUGE KakaSaku fan so when I seen this, I was like..sure I'll read it, because Kakashi's in it. I have to admit at first I wasn't too keen on the idea of Kakashi being bi, but ....OMG I loved your last chapter. Kakashi with Kiba is just...you've changed my whole perspective LoL. I still Love KakaSaku but kiba thrown in the mix ...occasionaly (for me) is a good thing! NIce job!
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Read up to the end of chapter 4, and the quality (grammatical XD) was still great. The subject matter... was *blush* uh...wow. Please update this. :D