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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another sizzling chapter. The interactions were great, not sure why you're dissatisfied. The kiss scene between Sakura and Ino was amusing and hot by the way. There is a lot of feeling and description that helps to make these experiences beleivable and keep the reader enrapt. I think you have pulled these scenes off well.
But, there was no Inuzuka seal this time-- are Sakura and Kiba headed for a problem later on? Will there be a following chapter with Kiba and Kakashi together or is that going to be left up to the limits of our own imaginings?
Great job-- post again soon :]
But, there was no Inuzuka seal this time-- are Sakura and Kiba headed for a problem later on? Will there be a following chapter with Kiba and Kakashi together or is that going to be left up to the limits of our own imaginings?
Great job-- post again soon :]
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh WOW *_* If i were a guy, I'd totally have a nosebleed now *_* That....was VERY HOT *_*
I hope you continue ^^ Amazing....*_*
Liah xx
I hope you continue ^^ Amazing....*_*
Liah xx
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June 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! HOT KAKASHI X SAKURA X KIBA ACTION JUST LIKE I WANTED! man it feels like christmas... can't wait to see what new things that the next chapter will bring. ;p
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This very well-written. Loved the Oro joke in chapter one. XD Continuing to read chapters 2 and 3 right now.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. I am a big fan of Kiba and Kakashi with just about any pairing. The characters are well developed and the situations are believable. I hope you post more soon. I am so looking forward to seeing what happens when they return to Leaf.
Keep up the great work!!!
Keep up the great work!!!
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story you got to write more ok!!!...?
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
monkey lady you rock!! i shiver as i anticipate the coming chapters... there definitely needs to be some hot kakashi X sakura action! more smut please!!