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for Teach Me

by bean1498

schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
congrats on the bun in the oven and take your time i know how hard it is to be with child mines fixing to be 3 come Dec. so far your good i plan to look over your other stuff and see if there is anything i like and i hope that soon you have the time and energy to write again
person a-hidden-shadow
schedule July 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I'm at the point of begging for an update, or something like that. This is just awesome, and I can't believe I haven't read it earlier.
person tyciol
schedule May 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Great story, hadn't been into anything yaoi-related for nearly a year, nice to see it still clicks. Has a different feel than the anime. Actually I'm only about halfway through so I feel drawn to continuing.
person nacht
schedule April 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This may come late (you may have already had your child) but take care of yourself. I love what you write and would (and will) happily wait until you are able to take a minute or three for yourself. My daughter is almost 5 and I still haven't been mentally creative enough to write. Be well and stay optimistic.
person Alpine02
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it.. And congrats.. Hope to see more when you are feeling up to it, I love your writing.
Thanks
Alpine
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This really is one of my favourite stories.
I know updating this isn't your main focus right now being pregnant and all (congratulations on that btw.) but I would really love to read some more.
Until then I'll patiently wait for a new chapter
Love merQueen
person Anon
schedule January 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't give up on this fic! I rarely read yoai or threesomes, but this one was just too hot for me to put down. Your last update was too long ago, but if I remember correctly, Shino is trying to get Sakura to forgive him and he is devulging the fact that he has feelings for her. I love that pairing, but I also like Sakura with Kiba. Come on...please find some time for us dedicated readers of your works. UPDATE!!
person Sanity through Madness
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey, life steps in every now and then to knock you on your ass. You shouldn't have to even apologize to people - they should just thank you for even having any of this story posted to begin with. Congratulations, by the way, and know that there are still some non-bitchy readers hanging around who still genuinely want to read your work.
person Jessie
schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a totally fucking awesome story.
With that said, I was a bit shaky-feeling when you mentioned the rape that would happen. I didn't know how I would feel about it as I usually avoid stories or other media that contain that subject. However, I read it, and it made me cry. It was necessary to the story though, and I cried even more when Shino repeatedly apologized and tried to make up for it. So many different aspects of your story has brought out a reaction from me I didn't expect. That is the mark of truly good writing. I love this story, and I commend you for having an excellent plot and the smut that we all love, and making it come together so wonderfully. I can't wait until you update this, as it's one of the best stories I've read in the fanfiction genre. You've done a excellent job so far, please keep it coming.
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad this hasn't died; I totally understand about having to leave stuff alone for a while when life gets in the way of writing. ;) Anyways, Here's wishing you a happy, healthy pregnancy! Congrats, and congrats on what sounds like a promotion as well!