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hmm wonderful, the fic is excellent, good luck with the baby ^^

I'm so into this fic! I stumbled across it last night, read until I got too sleepy, and then finished it today. I really like it! Kiba and Kakashi are two of my favorite guys in Naruto, and definitely two of the sexiest! I liked all the citrus-y parts, especially when it was Kiba and Sakura in his room. And Akamaru was so darn cute!

Speaking of Akamaru, I have to wonder where he is for most of this fic. Are you having him stay behind when Kiba goes on ANBU missions? I could see that a big white nindog is pretty recognizable, but it also seems like a good deal of Kiba's techniques would involve him. That might be something to clarify in future chapters.

I think it's really cute how Kiba's starting to get possessive without even realizing it. They're so cute together, and you've written him so well and so...i don't know. He's exactly what I would want in the bedroom! lol I like the whole "goddess" thing.

I think you did a good job with the rape aspect of the story. It was uncomfortable to read, but you handled it very well. I'm interested in seeing more interaction between Shino and Sakura now, and I'm actually starting to like the guy. After all, when they're in a system as screwed up as that, he did the only thing he knew of to protect her from something worse. I'm curious about who the other ANBU was that night -was it Kiba? I could see him disobeying orders to rape Sakura, since he'd been with her already and that would have been an even worse betrayal than Shino's, and Kiba and Shino are partners.

I can't wait to see where you go with this mission. I kinda hope Shino gets injured and Sakura has to heal him again. When I reached the last chapter, I was like "NOOOOOOO!!!!!" and my wild imagination conjured up this image of the other three being busy, and the two of them in camp, and Kiba and Naruto really not wanting to leave injured Shino with Sakura, and then her knocking him out because she couldn't handle being in close quarters with a conscious and aroused Shino, and him being all like "Will I wake up?" when she tells him she's going to knock him out...

Ahem. Anyway. Great job on this story, and I hope you update soon! :)

Haha Anony. I miss this story too, and I think I will have to remind myself to wait until a "complete" tag is on any story I read ever again. I'm impatient as hell!

I always come back though because I adore the writing.

I hope one day when I visit this bookmark I will jump for joy because the next chapter will be done! Hope everything is well in IRL MonkeyLady!

SO....HOWS IT GOIN????! YEAH ITS ME AGAIN, THAT STALKERISH REVIEWER THAT CANT STOP CHECKING YOUR STORY TO SEE IF YOU HAVE UPDATED OR NOT..

IM STARTING TO GIVE UP ON THIS STORY, BUT i KNOW THAT YOU ARE EXTREMELY BUSY WITH YOUR BABY AND EVERYTHING, AND THATS TOTALLY COOL AND EVERYTHING, BUT i REALLY HOPE THAT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE YOU UPDATE..I REALLY MISS THIS STORY..

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You're story is very awsome, and i can't wait til the next chapter comes out!

awesome so far. look forward to whenever u update. good luck with ur store and everything else.

I love this story. Please keep up the good work.

Awesome story so far. Can't wait to see how the mission goes. Would love to see Sakura "make up" with Shino eventually.

Aiyah...I have reread this story so many times! I'm anxious to see who Sakura will or won't end up with.

Ohmigawd!!!! Shino!!! The poor thing!!! *cries* And poor, poor, Sakura.... *tears*