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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'll do the fan girly thing first.. This is a great fanfic!
Ok now that's done. I found this fic a while back and just now have returned to it. And low and behold there were numerous updates. It gave my evening a push for the better.
I'm one of the few people who actually like Sakura. I know, know, she's whiny and cries a lot. But she is the emotional out let for team seven.
I think you handled the rape well, even though you didn't want to. (Poor Shino, don't forget he needs redemption too.) I'm not one to read rape and what not, but I felt it wasn't over played or trivialized. Nice job.
It's a nice little touch with Kiba and the "marking". I've always been a fan of Kiba. **fades into a nice daydream of...*** Err never mind that. Kiba has always felt like a very straight forward guy, and you've kept that in character. Bravo!
Kakashi is ... well Kakashi I don't think there is a way to define him. You've kept the mystery about him alive. Thanks.
Keep updating and I'll keep reading!
ja ne
Ok now that's done. I found this fic a while back and just now have returned to it. And low and behold there were numerous updates. It gave my evening a push for the better.
I'm one of the few people who actually like Sakura. I know, know, she's whiny and cries a lot. But she is the emotional out let for team seven.
I think you handled the rape well, even though you didn't want to. (Poor Shino, don't forget he needs redemption too.) I'm not one to read rape and what not, but I felt it wasn't over played or trivialized. Nice job.
It's a nice little touch with Kiba and the "marking". I've always been a fan of Kiba. **fades into a nice daydream of...*** Err never mind that. Kiba has always felt like a very straight forward guy, and you've kept that in character. Bravo!
Kakashi is ... well Kakashi I don't think there is a way to define him. You've kept the mystery about him alive. Thanks.
Keep updating and I'll keep reading!
ja ne
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June 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great plot progression. Your pacing is, as always, flawless. I can't wait to see how you resolve all the tension.
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i cant believe thats all that you updated! I love this story!! This story is simply amazing!! you HAVE to write more! update sooner!
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May 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story! I love Kakashi (even if I want him to be monogamous), and I feel so badly for Shino. He's so sweet and alluring in an intense and eccentric sort of way...I really can't wait until you update. Please do so soon!
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May 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I'M ADDICTED AND YOUR NOT SUPPLYING VERY WELL
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May 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have waited patiently for the update on this fic. You did not disappoint my dear! Awesome! I like the way you are fitting in the Shino/Sakura thing. I just love Shino!!! And Kiba, Kakashi, Genma, Neji...okay I am a whore, what can I say! Great job! Update soon please!!!
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I can't wait to find out who Anko's Kenjii is. If he's a pain in the ass guy, that doesn't narrow it down too much. All men are a pain in the ass sometimes. I can't wait to read about Sakura's mission.
Rox
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! yay! yay! yay! you updated! thank you!!!!!!! i tell you i check this site daily just for this story, and nearly fell over when i saw today you updated!!! ok. so very happy that sakura was able to get that off her chest with tsuande, but i was also happy to see that tsunade was disappointed in sakura leaving her as apprentice. it has to be sad for tsunade to lose the one person she thought of as a daughter. i hope that relationship can be mended. tsuande has lost so much in the past, that sakura is almost all she has. (other than shizune)
shino hmm....i'm with sakura in wondering if he doesn't feel something more for her. in previous chapters where she healed him, there wasn't much of a hint of it. he actually implied that kiba may feel more for her. but now i'm not so sure. he honestly wants forgivness, and sakura in her best way is truly trying to give it to him. i hope she can.
kiba is so....yummy, but protective as we already knew. he must be starting to truly have feelings for sakura to step up to his closest friend like that. i was sure he was about to tear shino limb from limb, and in his guilt shino may have let him. i hope that a relationship between sakura and kiba develops soon. i love that pair together.
i can't really say what i think of anko yet. she's so aggressive. but she seems to have sakura's best interest at heart so maybe she won't completely crush the girl. i mean sakura's already been through so much in this story, i'm hoping some happiness is headed her way. (in the form of an strong, sexy, triangle havin', dog lovin, inuzuka) :D
congrats on the new home. may you find years of happiness and peace there. i don't think i need to say it, but please update as soon as possible. i miss this story!
shino hmm....i'm with sakura in wondering if he doesn't feel something more for her. in previous chapters where she healed him, there wasn't much of a hint of it. he actually implied that kiba may feel more for her. but now i'm not so sure. he honestly wants forgivness, and sakura in her best way is truly trying to give it to him. i hope she can.
kiba is so....yummy, but protective as we already knew. he must be starting to truly have feelings for sakura to step up to his closest friend like that. i was sure he was about to tear shino limb from limb, and in his guilt shino may have let him. i hope that a relationship between sakura and kiba develops soon. i love that pair together.
i can't really say what i think of anko yet. she's so aggressive. but she seems to have sakura's best interest at heart so maybe she won't completely crush the girl. i mean sakura's already been through so much in this story, i'm hoping some happiness is headed her way. (in the form of an strong, sexy, triangle havin', dog lovin, inuzuka) :D
congrats on the new home. may you find years of happiness and peace there. i don't think i need to say it, but please update as soon as possible. i miss this story!
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May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That's nice! I had only seen brief references to Kiba-Saku in other fics, but I hadn't actually read any story about it. I really liked the way you write, and I'm aching to read chapter 2... but it's late, so I'll do it tomorrow.
Good job!
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I wondered if you'd ever be back...