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I was just randomly checking in on you and happened to notice you'd updated this fic! Sure, it's been a few months, but still, an update is an update. I like the more serious turn you've taken with the story. It's good to show the not so pleasant side of being female shinobi. I'm eager to see what Sakura will do as her ANBU training continues. I hope you don't give up on this fic!! There's so much to resolve. If you ever need a beta or need an ear (or eye as the case may be) to toss ideas to, you know how to reach me. :)

man, i have been waiting for this story to continue and I haven't visited since you posted 'when big boys play'. Thank you for continuing, I am surprised at the darker tone this story has taken, but I like it. Update soon, it's on my favs. Seriously, I will resort to begging! Anyway great job keep it up.

Please, Please, PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I need an update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you will repair the rift between Shino and Sakura.
I also hope there will be more Kiba/Sakura/Kakashi!!!!!!

This story is absolutly awesome.
^_^

Omg! I absolutly love Teach me!!!! You have to write more soon please!!!!

~Rae

Wow this is a really good story. It's well written, lucid and flows well. I like the fact that Kiba's getting jealous and I'm looking forward to some NejiSaku, SasuSaku action maybe (makes puppy dog eyes - normally I hate that pairing but for some reason your Sasuke might make it work!) I also like evil Tsunade. Perhaps now Sakura might stop whinging and pound her next attacker (if there is one) through the wall or something. But poor Shino, he's really getting the crap kicked out of him in this story.. perhaps he should be rewarded for all the meaness that keeps happening to him! Anyho thought I'd say I liked it and can't wait for the next chapter!

What a powerful and compelling story, at every turn I was left stunned and simply captivated by every detail. This is SO well thought out and executed. Honestly im in awe and left wanting so much more. I was not expecting to get wrapped up into such a wonderfully told story tonight but I couldn't stop reading and its now WAY past my bed time. Thank you SO much for writing and sharing this story.

Im not sure if I have reviewed this yet, but wow. If I have, thats ok. This is an amazing story, and it deserves it. The characterizations are spot on, , theres a real live plot being tensely and artfully revealed and to top it off the lemons are great! Bravo! Please, keep going! Im holding my breath!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE please.

I really hate Tsunade for what she had done to Sakura. A good teacher/mentor would have found a better solution. Somethings definately need to change. I think Sakura was a little too lenient to Shino, she was angy and scared, but she even had him train with her when she could have had someone else do it, which would have made more sense. This story is very well written. Please update soon.