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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I definitely missed several updates lol, but I'm so glad to read the continuation of this story. The first half was delicious smut, but I'm even more impressed at how you've turned this into a really fascinating story. I'm looking forward to reading more about how Sakura survives her training and her evolving relationships with the men in her life. Thanks so much for posting this story!
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absoultly love this story! and i also love shino sakura pairings so i was a little more into the last chapter than most ppl. I love shino and i feel bad for him and sakura. He did what he thought would be best and is willing to deal with the consequences.i also liked the fact he still threatened her to teach her to really fight back.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!
I've been waiting for this update! Gasp! It was Shino! Never saw that coming... really, you had me racking my brains trying to figure it out. I am so happy you updated!
KaS
I've been waiting for this update! Gasp! It was Shino! Never saw that coming... really, you had me racking my brains trying to figure it out. I am so happy you updated!
KaS
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lol...wow amzing job for both chappy 1 and 2. i'm off to read the rest.
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January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was amazingly hot chappy(ch4)
wow...friction causing awesome...lol
wow...friction causing awesome...lol
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January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has become my obsession. I can't stop reading it. I love how you captured Kiba's animal instincts, but also some of Sakura's innocence. Normally, I despise Sasuke, but so far I like him and how he interacts with his Team. (almost like a normal human being :) The way Kiba described Sakura as a mixture of dirty and sweet was perfect. I have reread it several times to see if I could pick up on who her attacker was. Mainly rereading the parts with Kiba, because I'm hoping you don't have him as the attacker, and Sakura just never noticed the mark on his back. I'm not a fan of the dp, but I managed to get through the Sakura/Kiba/Kakashi scene. The romantic part of me hopes this story will eventually have Sakura and Kiba together as a real couple. Seeing as this it my first review for this site, I'm not sure it it's not just going to be about sex and Sakura will be right about kunoichi always ending up alone.
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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I noticed that you mentioned that Shino-kun was out on a mission before, and that Kiba had to meet him later in the mission to wrap it up...also that Tsunade made both of those men leave just in case she found out who they were...and that Sakura said only the people closest to her knew she hid her weapons in different places in her room....I get the feeling that the one who raped her was Shino, and he threw up because he really did care for her. Plus, Naruto and Sasuke said they really didn't travel in the same social circles much....so it's making me believe all this....am I right? Please write the next chapters soon...I really want to find out!!!
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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This definitely took a turn that I wasn't really prepared for, but I'm not complaining. I trust you and your abilities as an author to know that the story will turn out right. But darn you and your cliffhangers, I want to know what happens. Grrr, *has theories, doesn't know if they are right*
Keep up the good work Monkey Lady, can't wait to read more from you.
Keep up the good work Monkey Lady, can't wait to read more from you.
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December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I had this beautifuly written long review done for you and a pop up erased it all. Pretty much this story is just a great read so far!
I fully intend to elaborate in another review, but I hate repeating myself, even if no one heard the first time. To sum it up, I Love your characterization, dialogue, and plot! You have even sent me seeking other Kiba fics. So, I hope that there is more to come soon and keep up the fantastic work!
I fully intend to elaborate in another review, but I hate repeating myself, even if no one heard the first time. To sum it up, I Love your characterization, dialogue, and plot! You have even sent me seeking other Kiba fics. So, I hope that there is more to come soon and keep up the fantastic work!
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December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! Okay, I am not much of a threesome or Yaoi person, but for some reason Kiba, Kakashi and Sakura just do it for me. This is the only fic with the above criteria that I have ever read!!! Interesting! I still can't figure out who did it? Will we ever? Great writing! Keep it coming!!!!