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for Inside on the Outside

by AkiraDawn

person TVO
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yatte!

That was a lot of fun. Interesting that Kakashi doesn't seem to care if others see his girlfriend naked as well. Hope we get to see more of Kakashi's happy "celebration" later :) .
person Terri
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man I love your stories.Keep up the good work and I cant wait to read your next Akatsuki story.
person Sayomi XD
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yep Happy Happy birthay kakashi!
person Moiraine
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's really funny to see Kakashi and Iruka sooo trashed. It'd be funnier if Naruto ran into them while they were walking home! He'd be like! "WOAH! I haven't even seen Ero-sennin do that with a girl's pants!" That'd be hilariosus!
person Ox King
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I laughed my way through to the end. Is there going to be any more chapters? Thanks for taking the time to write.
person Sayomi XD
schedule July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wonder wut would happen if Sakura or Naruto catched Anko and Kakashi doing it...?
person ronsmyhero
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this fic! Although I'm not a huge Anko/Kakashi fan. (weird I know) Great job!
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Once their instructing duties and mission duties were set aside, they hooked up, broke up, made up, made out, put out, undressed, got dressed, got caught, and got laid" I like that. Some of your one liners are chocked full with a sort of cynical wisdom that I like.

"Besides, it’s like wearing your inside on the outside and that’s sexy.” Very nice. I like that a lot and might feel compelled to quote you some day. ;)

^_^ Going to go on to more chapters. Like it so far.
person Thea
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
heh heh that milkshake thing was funny and holy crap, I just got a craving for one!! :O Great chap!! XD
person Sayomi XD
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was funny!