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by littleolmee

person D/H
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice..Totally brought tears to my eyes..A very sad, yet touching last chapter..

The only complaint i have against this story is, the grammar is bad and this story is WAY too short, in
plot and character interactions, etc..
person lo
schedule September 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got a little misty eyed for a minute. Nice job!
person Darling_425
schedule September 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story and I can't wait for the 15 chapter you mentioned ^_^
person dancingkitsune
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wont the whole "werent you dead yesterday?" thing be a bit of a problem...? O.o;;; ah well, guessed they'll have to get use to the undead thing that Naruto always pulls xD

NO!! Never use Wikipedia!! It lies!! Like, seriously....According to Wikipedia, the presedent of the Junior class over at my highschool created the unicicle in 2027 xDD
person Neko-Chan
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! hes alive ^_^!!! *dances*
Wicked awesome chapter!!!
person mscs3
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yea! a new chapter. Your right it was a little sad at first, but it was a good chapter! Thanks for the email (I figured instead of emailing you back I would just review you:)) Thanks for droping a line! Looking forward to chapter 15 and Regain. Me
person Anna
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Naruto is not dead!! So I'm not going to kill you, I'm going to praise you for the awesome chapter! *hands a cookie tray*
person lo
schedule September 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very sweet. I really liked what you did with the story.
person Anna
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to fucking kill you if Naruto dies!!!! Arggggghh I was soo happy so far with your story, so you better not kill him! I'm liking very much your story so far so tçdon't go and ruin it
person hiei_jagenshi
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
totally awesome fic! please finsh!