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July 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hahaha, i like Kakashi's way of courtship, straight to the point ^_^ great chapter, cant wait for more!!!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
-pictures Naruto nizzling his kit retainers- kawaii ^_^ good chapter! The fight scene was good stuff! hope you update soon!!
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great job, I am glad that you changed the summery, now the reviews will come in. Nice job. I like the whole Lee and Sakura thing, and her revalation. He really is a good guy. So many other people make him out to be a freak, I hate that it is so shallow. I really like what you did, it made me grin. Again this is a good peice of work.
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter gfour is the sam4 as chapter 3 where is chapter four i love this story and would like to contue to chapter 5
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! I love this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Me
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, but you constanly mix up 'then' and 'than'. Try this when you finish writing a chapter read it out loud or have someone else read it. Again, nice job. And the only reason you are not getting reviews is b/c I think you have oc in the summery, so many people try to sneak in marysue's when they do the oc thing. Try re-doing the summery. But over all grreat job. (I hope you do not make this some sort of marysue, I don't think you will) Keep up the good work.
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July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A little long winded at points, but this is really really good. I really like this. Just remember to look up the difference between 'then' and 'than'. But over all you have done a good job.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good, well written, and so far the story is good. But you are canstantly switching 'then' and 'than', these are not interchangable. But this is good. Keep up the good work.
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July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
lol, offical sake man ^_^ i want one!!!
good chapter, cant wait for more!!!
good chapter, cant wait for more!!!
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great fic!! I love the storyline so far ^_^ the merger was a great idea!! it fits the manga well ^^
lol...that last chapter really got me...Naruto being mothered by hookers!! lol!!!!
Cant wait for more soon!!!!
lol...that last chapter really got me...Naruto being mothered by hookers!! lol!!!!
Cant wait for more soon!!!!