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December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good one!!! Very good! Doing any more with this pairing?
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October 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it all excpet for one thing. The perspective was unusual, and so it took me a while to follow it easily. Otherwise I liked it.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was very believeable, well-written, thoughtful, and very hot. I was surprised how much I liked it. It's a very very good piece of writing.
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September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. So kinky and smexy and hot and smexy and, and a whole lot of other stuff!^^. Good job on the story, it was quite good!^^. Not enough Kurekiba out there.
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September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't usually read Het, but this time I thought I should give it a try... I'm really glad I did, since this was goooooood!
I could feel the 'tension' between the characters and I specially liked that part in which Kurenai is thinking she should admonish her old charge but at the same time is 'succumbing' to his advances...
Everything felt very plausible, and it really was a marvellous touch to add Asuma to the fic, that it’s probably what makes it so believable and in character.
All in all, I loved this.
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good stuff! You played them quite well!^^
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July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice job! This was very well written. I enjoyed this story a lot. Keep up the good work.
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July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG That was so freakin awesome! So hot! I like the hint of Asuma/Ino too.
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July 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn Sin! Kiba has never been a very appealing character to me, I know he's not bad looking when he takes that damn hood off. But the raw sexuality of him in this story... roowwwllll! hehe. Asuma obviously has an Ino thing, so Kurenai needs to leave his ass & be with Kiba. You know, I've always kinda wondered if Konohamaru is Asuma's kid. Anyway, this story was very well written, I didn't notice any mistakes, the characters were believeable and the interaction was interesting. Good dialogue, hot lemon. All in all a very enjoyable read.
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July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was hot.
I never even thought of Kiba and Kurenai but the way you write it makes it seem to natural.
I never even thought of Kiba and Kurenai but the way you write it makes it seem to natural.