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OMFG!! this is hilarious!! SERIOUSLY!! i was cracking up like mad! i'm surprized they weren't giving me weird looks! well, maybe they were, i don't know... you've gotta update this!! PLEASE!! my favorite line was sasuke saying the pantie thing and raping naru!! this is great! i usually don't laugh like that at stuff, but this is just...the best fucking thing i've seen in a LONG time!! if ever!!^^~

I love this story! It's only been 3 chapters, but I find it so entertaining and well written! Yay, it's such a joy. I love Naruto and Sasuke equally. Sasuke is just hysterical, and Naruto's cluelessness makes me giggle. There have been about a million parts I wanted to point out and say I liked, but a million is a lot, so let me pick outta few: I for some reason chuckle really hard when Sasuke teases Naruto and both times said 'fuck you.' And it's so funny since your Naruto is innocent for the most part. And then that the thing fell on Itachi? And the red sandals? Gah, and then you make Naruto wear that and Sasuke's just hitting on him all over the place? Oh gosh, and I was so happy you picked Kakashi for that part (I don't want to say anything in case people read the reviews first before reading). So now I'm like, who will be the lion and the tin man and the wizard and the flying monkey? The way you write, I kind of think Gaara as the tin man would be super funny since he'd probably just sit there and when he finally got a heart it would reject him or something. But I'm really interested to see who you choose as the lion... only one person is super timid and afraid, and having her be the lion would be interesting... but weird. GAH! hurry up and write the next chapter so i don't have to wonder about it! love it love it love it! and i love sasuke having nosebleeds. i bet he's going to pass out soon from the blood loss! thanks for such a fun, great idea!

I hope you write more kind of absurd things for Naruto and Sasuke to say/do that make them fit in with their surroundings. I giggled at these lines, too cute.

“I don’t think were in Fire Country anymore, Sasuke.”

Complete with rolling green hills and flowers the size of Sasuke’s ego...

HEY, great story so far, please continue, ok? I really am looking forward to reading this, and here have a cookie. and btw you have an egomonster? wow. UPDATE SOON OR I WILL HUNT YA DOWN!!

That was very amusing. Write on sister. Although, instead of the house landing on the wicked witch of the north, it should land on Orichimaru.... just a suggestion. Good story though. It's kinda cute how Sasuke protects Naruto and either doesn't notice, or pretends he didn't do it.