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August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you have made my day. this is genius. pure genius.
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June 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor Naruto, he's going to be completely confused... Oh well, that made for some good humor. I just had the most uncontrollable laugh fit of this month. But it was an awesome story.
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April 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=27. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.
About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.
Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=27. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.
Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that was so fucking funny! i can't breath! i really am still laughing! *wipes away tears*
hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaha!
oh gosh i just thought, can you think of the embarresment both boys would go through if you wrote another chapter?! (even though i understand it's a 1 shot but just think!) like someone would have 2 explain what naruto wrote to him after him and sasuke settled it at his house (it coulda gone iether way bad or good.) and if like naruto had ran outa the house screaming or som,ething and found out what he wrote he woulda knownn sasuke's feelings and so on... but still that was so funny! i luv'd it!!!
hahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahhahaha!
oh gosh i just thought, can you think of the embarresment both boys would go through if you wrote another chapter?! (even though i understand it's a 1 shot but just think!) like someone would have 2 explain what naruto wrote to him after him and sasuke settled it at his house (it coulda gone iether way bad or good.) and if like naruto had ran outa the house screaming or som,ething and found out what he wrote he woulda knownn sasuke's feelings and so on... but still that was so funny! i luv'd it!!!
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December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
btw, i agree wit the person about 2 or 3 reviews up *points to the really long one* i personally don't really know what rim job or 'horizontal hustle' (which by the way even before neji said taijutsu i also somehow got lee stuck into my head doing some kool but wierd move) was. if your not going to make a sequel or another chappy u should atleast put the defintitions up even though i think everybody on here knows what a blow job is o.0 anyways i love ALL your story's your one of my fav. authors on here! kepp it up! =D
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
=D i'm like laughing and shit rofl and everything, really
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your palnning to kill me, aren't you?
That was SOOOOOOOOOO funny I was torn between laughing and breathing (apparently, laughing won, hands down)
As expected from a very creative writer, bravo!, that was some funny piece you wrote there. Definitely a thigh slapper (in more ways than one! ^_^)
Your palnning to kill me, aren't you?
That was SOOOOOOOOOO funny I was torn between laughing and breathing (apparently, laughing won, hands down)
As expected from a very creative writer, bravo!, that was some funny piece you wrote there. Definitely a thigh slapper (in more ways than one! ^_^)
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September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
okay, so now I'm mad at myself. I've read this story twice and I even told the story to a group of four friends. And I didn't even leave you a comment? I'm disgusted with myself. I mean, here I was reading a story that had made my day when I really needed it and I didn't even leave you a comment. What kind of friend am I? ....well, erm....supporter? Yeah, that's the word I'm looking for. ^^
Now I have to admit, I had to look up atleast have of those words myself while I was reading your story just so I know what the hell Naruto was putting in the letter. I didn't know what boner meant (my friend found it hilarious), I had no clue what a rim job was (and I still don't think I do. The slang dictionary on the net said something about giving the vital organ =the manhood= stimulation. Isn't that the same as blowjob? I mean, they both involve using your mouth, right?), Horizontal Hustle made me think of Lee for some strange odd reason. Well, the moment you said Taijutsu, gosh. (Anyways, what the hell is that? Naruto sucks off Sasuke while Sasuke is sucking him off? That's the only thing that seemed to make sense by name b/c it says Horizontal.)
When it actually came time for Sasuke to read the letter, you can just imagine how much I was laughing. And then Sakura hitting Naruto upside the head. Naruto is so adorably innocent. He thought that he had made it too rough. ^^ I couldn't believe what Sasuke said when he grabbed Naruto and went off with him. If you ever plan to write a sequel I'd be most happy. I should read your other stories too. I'll try when I have time. Btw, using Neji as a poor victim to help out Naruto was way too cute. Great job.
I really enjoyed the read and I have to be in school in about an hour. Great, I'm going to be thinking about Naruto's innocently spoken words while my professor teaches Math. -.-'
Later ^^,
and good luck with your future writings =p
~Ria ^.~
Now I have to admit, I had to look up atleast have of those words myself while I was reading your story just so I know what the hell Naruto was putting in the letter. I didn't know what boner meant (my friend found it hilarious), I had no clue what a rim job was (and I still don't think I do. The slang dictionary on the net said something about giving the vital organ =the manhood= stimulation. Isn't that the same as blowjob? I mean, they both involve using your mouth, right?), Horizontal Hustle made me think of Lee for some strange odd reason. Well, the moment you said Taijutsu, gosh. (Anyways, what the hell is that? Naruto sucks off Sasuke while Sasuke is sucking him off? That's the only thing that seemed to make sense by name b/c it says Horizontal.)
When it actually came time for Sasuke to read the letter, you can just imagine how much I was laughing. And then Sakura hitting Naruto upside the head. Naruto is so adorably innocent. He thought that he had made it too rough. ^^ I couldn't believe what Sasuke said when he grabbed Naruto and went off with him. If you ever plan to write a sequel I'd be most happy. I should read your other stories too. I'll try when I have time. Btw, using Neji as a poor victim to help out Naruto was way too cute. Great job.
I really enjoyed the read and I have to be in school in about an hour. Great, I'm going to be thinking about Naruto's innocently spoken words while my professor teaches Math. -.-'
Later ^^,
and good luck with your future writings =p
~Ria ^.~
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuudddddddddddeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
That was hilarious! I was laughing my ass off so hard, I almost fell outta my seat. You are, without a doubt, one of the most creative writers I've had the pleasure of coming across. I won't waste your time with all the mindles cliches about keeping up the good work and all that crap but dude!- Keep up the good work.
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That was hilarious! I was laughing my ass off so hard, I almost fell outta my seat. You are, without a doubt, one of the most creative writers I've had the pleasure of coming across. I won't waste your time with all the mindles cliches about keeping up the good work and all that crap but dude!- Keep up the good work.
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July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I got to give you your props on that one. I like the way it was lined up on the card hahahah.